Wow. I can't believe this has so little comments!
It's safe to say this is my favorite so far. Although there are a few I haven't read yet.
Oh man, I hate to do this... again. :/
You must have missed one of the rules, because you're supposed to have the title of your song in the story at least 3 times. (in this case "Slipped Away")
I wonder if Ally will let it go, because it'd be a shame. Especially since this story is just soooo awesome.
This is really getting me into fan fiction. I hope that when the contest's over you will still write some stories for us.