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Originally Posted by Beautiful Tragedy
Ok so to give you some commentary for your first story, I felt that the way you managed to sqeeze avril in there without having her be a part of it was great  and the way you made unwanted fit into the story was amazing  I also liked it because it was a breathe of fresh air and i was able to read through it without feeling like it was predictable in any way
Good job! you should consider doing more! |
I totally agree! Its very unique! I liked how you switched it up a bit and wrote it from the dogs point of view instead of a person. You did a damn good job writing being your first story. I hope to see more of it in the future!
* wink wink*
