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Old 04-21-2008, 04:32 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Choices

I enjoy playing around with short stories but will only start it off as a lot of people find lengthy stories off putting..If any body gets interested I'll post the rest but if not this will just die a natural painless death


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He knew he was dead from the moment he woke up..
He could sense things but his body was just a memory.He was in darkness, he felt nothing but a willingness to move on..But where ?..Shouldn't somebody be there to tell him..He seemed to be able to move but without knowing where it seemed pointless..So he waited for something to happen..
Nothing did..
How long he waited he had no idea, a second ? a million years ?..It didn't seem to matter..
"This is your number, don't lose it ! " boomed a loud voice..He looked down to where his hand would have been, he could see the number 67,478..It wasn't written down it just looked back at him circling slowly..It had no colour, no texture but he could see it clearly..
"3,684" boomed the voice..
He looked again at his number..How do you smile wihout a mouth, he didn't know but he smiled..This could take some time..
"67,478" boomed the same voice..
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