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Originally Posted by citygal3
does it have any forthcoming action? lol, like any problems and stuff. that makes it intersting. haha
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well it's not really a story if there's not a problem is it? :P
i'm sure i'll come up with something pretty bad, but i have to decide what it is...ok update:
Back at home, Deryck held the door open for me once again. I climbed out of the car. “Come here, Av.” He held out his arms. I stared at Deryck. I had heard of the tradition of a man carrying his newlywed wife over the threshold of the house after their wedding, but the idea of Deryck doing that to me made me think he might have completely lost his mind. I only weigh about 105 or 110 pounds, but Deryck weighed ten pounds more than me at most. I’m 5'2", Deryck is 5'5".
“Are you crazy?!” I asked him. Deryck’s smile disappeared in a flash. He put his arms down.
“Do you not want me to?”
“I want you to, but, aren’t I too heavy?”
“Av, you hardly weigh anything,” he laughed. “I may not be big, but I can carry you. I promise, I won’t drop you.”
Deryck had never, ever broken a promise to me. I knew he wasn’t about to start now. I took a deep breath and said, “Okay.” I allowed Deryck to sweep me into my arms. He supported my neck and upper back with his left arm, cradling my head in his arm. His other hand was slipped under my knees. I felt so in love. I wrapped my arms around his neck.
Deryck carried me up the walkway to our large Beverly Hills home. He did a gymnast-like feat to accomplish pulling his keys out and unlocking the door with his right arm, while still supporting my legs with it. I laughed at him extensively while he tried to get us inside the house. He finally got the door open and carried me into the foyer.
Placing me down, Deryck looked rather pissed off. “Goddamned keys,” he muttered. “Why do we have to put so many locks on the house?” I ran my fingers through Deryck’s hair to calm him down.
“You know why, Deryck. The thought of someone we don’t want in here getting in terrifies me.”
“I know, baby. You’re lucky I don’t know how to say no to you and your crazy ideas.” I giggled.
i guess a potential problem might be some be get right down to the "forthcoming action" immediately, i prefer to build up a story.