[avryckfan2005]

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(sorry this was a test to see if the first one went on thats why this one is a bit diffrent...ithink)
Hi, im new and i am as depressed as the rest of you about Avril and Deryck breaking u. so i decided to write a story. This story contains Drama/Thriller/Mystery/Romance. I'll put the first post upand if you guys comment and love it i'll put the sec. part up and if you dont comment i'll still put it up, then if you do comment i'll finsh the story i hope you like it, its my first fan fic

(oh yeah i have this bad editing skill so you'll notice that alot but it will improve...hopefully enjoy)

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Deryck POV
As I walked into my house it was dark, kind of like my heart dark faint broken…although the house wasn’t broken as I walked through the front hall I could see are wedding pictures hanging on the wall. I could see one down on the ground shattered with the paper sticking out, ripped.
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“Avril, Please I love you stay with me” I cried
“Deryck. I told you I cant do this anymore” avril said starting to cry
“but I love you… don’t you love me” I said starting to tear up
“everyday” she sniffed “but now I don’t know what I want”
“ I know what I want” I replied “you”
“and a baby” she interrupted “but I cant do that now, not now”
“that’s fine” I sniffed “will wait after this fourth album release after everything”
“Oh Der” Avril said with her voice cracking “I just cant give you that right now”
She than came to me and kissed me on the cheek and whispered in my ear
“I’m sorry”
She then let go of me leaving me with my stomach wrenching in pain, making me feel like I wanted to puke.
She grabbed her purse then shut the door.
I looked around I couldn’t believe what was happening couldn’t even speak, I couldn’t even breathe.
“F*UCK” I screamed and slammed the wall then a picture frame fell and shattered over the floor.
“shit” I whispered to myself as I bent down and grabbed it. It was one of the wedding pictures. It was the one where she was looking into the camera smiling as I was kissing her cheek looking into that picture made me break down in that dark house alone.
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Steve flicked on the lights.
“okay man lets just keep it simple. A few guitars, some shirts, and underwear, you know I don’t really think your ready to you know….leave”
“you got that right” I saod looking at him I could understand he was just trying to make me feel better that’s what friends were for to make you feel better. Too bad it couldn’t help, too bad I still didn’t understand

[avryckfan2005]

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OOps i reposted this lol. i didnt think my first one went one but i did lol, and i dont know how to delete this so you get two...YAY hope you like it

[Camber239]

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Wow amazing start!!

[xx Leila xx]

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I'll delete the other thread.

[WaitJustAMinute]

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[Grande]

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It's good! Keep on writing, it really caught me!

[Aibrean]

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Oh my God, this brought me too tears, great start !

[Grande]

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Update!

[serena-1986]

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It broke my heart, but I like it... I think you should continue with the story.

[avryckfan2005]

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Hehe thanks sorry i didint reply my computer went in and i lost the file but then i got it back hope you like it
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Avril POV
I walked into the penthouse of the Ritz Carlton its golden lamps and brown wall made the room look warm
“you could sleep on that bed over there” Brandon said the me kissing my neck.
“stop” I told him
“ now, now, honey” he said to me as he was poring a glass of expensive wine and offering me some “play nice we don’t have to go through this again” I shivered
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The look in Deryck’s eyes made me want me to shut my eyes and make it all go away.
“Oh Der” I cried to him with my voice cracking, I shut my eyes and tears ran down my face “I just cant give you that right now”
I couldn’t believe I was doing this I was breaking his heart but this is what was right this was the safest way. I knew I loved him with all my heart and I knew he would forgive me but I just needed to go,.
I walked over to him and as he stood stiff but weak I kissed him on the cheek I could feel his tears from crying it broke my heart. I put my hands on his chest he lifted up to grab them, but then I let go. I looked into his eyes and whispered
“I’m Sorry” I grabbed my purse and immeditly left the house as I was walking down the steps I could hear a bang from the wall and glass break I sighed and got into the car. When I got in there he was waiting for me
“So” Brandon said confidently poring some vodka into his glass, then turned to me “ Did he believe you”
“oh yeah” I said sadly he handed me a glass “I chugged it not caring what was in it all I wanted to do was get rid of this night
“good” he said “now that poor little rocker and his shitty band can make some decent music outta these events”
“shut up” I snapped…we exchanged looks
“now av, this was the way to go it was either you brake his heart, or I kill him. You choose remember”
I huffed
“what now” I said to him quietly
“now” he said “we get this party started”
“what do you mean” I replied curiously
“that drank I gave you, lets just say two words rape-drug” He laughed
“you son of a B*itch” I said quietly my voice started to get weak shit I mummerd
he came closer and moved my hair away from my face I started to see blurs
“I couldn’t wait for this day” he whisperd into my ear
As I started to see blurs I started to see blackness I tired to fight him off but my muscles were to weak.
Then it went dark

[avryckfan2005]

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Avril POV
I walked into the penthouse of the Ritz Carlton its golden lamps and brown wall made the room look warm
“you could sleep on that bed over there” Brandon said the me kissing my neck.
“stop” I told him
“ now, now, honey” he said to me as he was poring a glass of expensive wine and offering me some “play nice we don’t have to go through this again” I shivered
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The look in Deryck’s eyes made me want me to shut my eyes and make it all go away.
“Oh Der” I cried to him with my voice cracking, I shut my eyes and tears ran down my face “I just cant give you that right now”
I couldn’t believe I was doing this I was breaking his heart but this is what was right this was the safest way. I knew I loved him with all my heart and I knew he would forgive me but I just needed to go,.
I walked over to him and as he stood stiff but weak I kissed him on the cheek I could feel his tears from crying it broke my heart. I put my hands on his chest he lifted up to grab them, but then I let go. I looked into his eyes and whispered
“I’m Sorry” I grabbed my purse and immeditly left the house as I was walking down the steps I could hear a bang from the wall and glass break I sighed and got into the car. When I got in there he was waiting for me
“So” Brandon said confidently poring some vodka into his glass, then turned to me “ Did he believe you”
“oh yeah” I said sadly he handed me a glass “I chugged it not caring what was in it all I wanted to do was get rid of this night
“good” he said “now that poor little rocker and his shitty band can make some decent music outta these events”
“shut up” I snapped…we exchanged looks
“now av, this was the way to go it was either you brake his heart, or I kill him. You choose remember”
I huffed
“what now” I said to him quietly
“now” he said “we get this party started”
“what do you mean” I replied curiously
“that drank I gave you, lets just say two words rape-drug” He laughed
“you son of a B*itch” I said quietly my voice started to get weak shit I mummerd
he came closer and moved my hair away from my face I started to see blurs
“I couldn’t wait for this day” he whisperd into my ear
As I started to see blurs I started to see blackness I tired to fight him off but my muscles were to weak.
Then it went dark

[serena-1986]

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Hey, I thought you gave up!!! I like it!! I want a new update soon!