Charles and Renee... A story not from the ordinary...

[avandspfan]

So I wrote a short story in math class a few weeks ago... It has nothing to do with Avril or her bandmates or anybody else affliated with her...



"Where is she?" I asked as he opened his front door.
"I don't know," he responded.
"I SAID WHERE IS SHE?" I screamed in his face.
"Renee for God's sake, calme down."
"Damnit, don't tell me to calm down," I yelled louder trying to grap his collar but missing it completely.
"I don't know where she is," he said.
"She's here isn't she?"
"No I know for a fact she's not," he said impatiently.
"Charlie, let me see her!"
"Renee, you know you're not supposed to be here."
"She's here, Charlie please, I want to see my baby."
"Renee go away."
"Why have you taken her?"
"For God's sake Renee, there is no baby!" he yelled.
"Charlie, that's not true," I wispered falling through his arms.
"What have you become?" he asked as I slipped into the darkness.

I woke up in a bed that I used to call my own. His presence was everywhere. I hate this. For what he has done I do not know. But I know he is hiding something from me. And if he's not. I will just be on my way.

His View:

She was the most intelligent woman I knew. Her thoughts are deep and her horizon is wide. I don't know how things could change so suddenly. It's unreal. Her mind is corrupted. Her views on everythign isn't quite as clear as they used to be. I only ask myself, what the hell is going on?

Her View:

I used to love him, but he started questiong my actions. If I called him out on something I was immediately wrong. I am never wrong. Never wrong.


Since the story is short I am posting in short updates...

Hope you like it! -Anz-

[Liqaa']

Keep going...Update soon please!

[avandspfan]

"Renee are you up?"
"Yes Charles, I am."
"Are you feeling normal?"
"I'm always normal," I responded cooly.
"Right, but you have to believe me when I say there is no baby."
"Charlie, babe, we've been married for three years, and had a baby after our second anniversary."
"You're wrong," he said sadly shaking his head.
"I'm never wrong."
"Yes, you were always wrong."
"And you're always right huh?" I asked.
"Whatever."
"Just tell me where my baby is... Please?"
"No where."
"She is too somewhere. How can she not be somewhere?" I asked suddenly feeling cold.
"SHE'S DEAD DAMNIT! YOU'RE DEAD! YOU BOTH ARE DEAD! GONE... QUIT HAUNTING ME!"

And with that Charlie reached for a gun under the pillow and took a bullet to the brain. As his body fell through my ghost, his rose up and gently kissed my forehead.

THE END


I said it was a short story... And I meant it... :P It's hard to write a long story in 15 minutes between a quiz and notes... If you were disappointed.. I am very sorry...

[ginger]

....

Her baby was dead... and she doesn't know. Or maybe she knows.. but she couldn't face the fact.

Thanks! This is an amazing story.

*reps*