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Old 08-17-2007, 10:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Nothing
How can someone not be someone,
When you think you know them,
To find out, they don’t really care

And now sitting as I am I find nothing,
No one that I can confide,
No I Cannot hide,
Anymore

I need the peace, my something,
But I have, I have nothing,
And how I feel inside
Is like a blunt fire in my lung

Now knowing you don’t really care
I die a little more inside,
A little more of me is caught
In that continuous vortex of nothing




Lost
Frustrating is not a word,
It does not describe the world.

Confusion, then dark,
Nothing but then something.

I am lost but am not scared,
I will find my way.



Twisting Darkness
Where do I stand,
My life is musk,
Dirt, it is unplanned,

I see nothing there,
Lonely I stand,
As I watch my shadow rot.

Unplanned,
Lost in my own doubt,
So dark, It is hollow.

I do not know,
It digs deeper each day,
I am in twisting darkness.

Betrayal
Betrayal,
Caring then hating,
Betrayal,
Loving then cremating

Stab, stab, stab, my back can feel the pain,
Pull, pull, pull, permanent, the blood will stain,
Forever a scar remains.


No More Hiding
So confusing, I felt lost.
My pessimistic mind brought me to dark places,
But as I arrived, my spirit deepened,
My opinion changed.

The thrill, a first time,
Fresh, exciting,
Darkness disappeared,
And for those few moments I was me.

No more hiding, I realise that now.






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Old 08-17-2007, 10:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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They are all really good but I cant pick my favorit because of that reason. Good job and keep up the good work.

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Old 08-17-2007, 11:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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your good with yoru words id definitely build on it if i were you
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Old 08-18-2007, 11:48 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I can relate to one of the poems above, actually. The lines are easily imagined in my mind.

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Nice lewis

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