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10-19-2007, 09:31 AM
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I know it's wierd that I will start writting this story again, but I thought long about this story and felt something good coming up
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10-19-2007, 11:39 AM
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since I only got one comment on if I should start to write again, I hope that I will get more comments on this update so I know if I should go one writting
‘’Ally, honey. You can’t take that much toys with you.’’ I looked at Ally who just wanted to take with her, her train and all the stuffed animals. ‘’But mommy, they need a story before sleeping.’’ A smile came on my face. ‘’Tony will give them a story before they go to sleep.’’ She was a little up sad. But brought back her stuffed animals to her room and came back with her big bear. ‘’mommy, this one can come?’’ She put the bear on my legs, since I was sitting on the floor to pack my bag. ‘’Yes, it can come.’’ She put the bear in my huge bag and I did one more check if I had everything, for me and Ally. ‘’Derrrrrryck.’’ Ally was trying to say Deryck’s name the right way. Which was very cute because she didn’t know Deryck that well. He saw her a year ago. And I knew Ally didn’t remember it. But she loved watching sum 41 songs on TV and sing a long with ‘’In to Deep’’. ‘’ABOWWT’’ Now she was saying about on the American way, which made me laugh load. ‘’Av where are you laughing about!’’ Tony walked in with an angry face. The first thing was going through my head was ‘trouble’. ‘’Nothing, just about Ally.’’ If looks would kill I would be gone a long time a go. ‘’Sure, Ally, you where calling with some guy didn’t you?!’’ He came dangerous close to me and I didn’t like it at all. ‘’Tony, I just needed to laugh about Ally, that’s all.’’ I heard Ally jumping on her bed in the room next to us. ‘’Derrrrrrrrrrryck’’ He heard that. Before I knew it he hit me in the face. I couldn’t scream, because I didn’t want Ally to come. He gave me an other slap in the face which made me fall on the floor. Most people would defend themselves. But best for me was to let it happen. With his foot he kicked me in my belly. After that he left me alone laying one the floor. I felt tears running down my face, good thing I was going to LA for a few days. And leave Toronto behind. Just for a few days.
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10-19-2007, 12:26 PM
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YAYYYY!!!!!! You started writing again!!!!!!!!!! [Happy]
(I know that what happens in the update is not so nice, but I'm happy anyways!)
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10-19-2007, 12:44 PM
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OMG, I was happy until that stupid jerk Tony hit Avril, I don't know why I'm saying this but please someone kill that violent asshole!!
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10-19-2007, 04:39 PM
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My God, why has she not taken Ally away and run?!
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10-19-2007, 09:09 PM
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Cuz Tony the pig would go and kill them ALL!!!! Including Deryck, that is, since Ally had to say his name and now Tony will try to kill Deryck. Avril really HAS to go AWAY!!!!!
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10-20-2007, 05:02 AM
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After a lot of pushing to Ally we finally got in the plane. She just needed to give all the bears and other friends a kiss before she could leave. And then she needed to hug Tony and give him all her kisses because she wanted a kiss for every night. And wanted to give him a kiss for every night she was away from him. Ally loved him so much. She never noticed anything of me and Tony fighting. She was so peaceful. I didn’t want her to be afraid about me and Tony fighting. ‘’Mommy, can we go with Derrrrrrryck to the zooooo?’’ I didn’t knew if Deryck would still think Ally is cute, or if he would like to do something with the 3 of us. ‘’He has to work, but he maybe come over to visit us.’’ While I was thinking about seeing Deryck again I felt a little happier. We didn’t see each other for a long time. But once in a while we had a long phone call. Deryck and I where friends like me and Evan are. But maybe even closer. ‘’MOMMY!!! Phffffone!’’ I looked up and say my phone went off.
‘’Avril.’’
‘’yes, it’s with Deryck!.’’ I was happy to hear from him, because he supposed to call me this morning but he didn’t.
‘’Are you in the plane now?’’
I saw Ally walking over to the bathroom of the plane and went after her.
‘’Yes I am in the plane. Can you wait for a second?’’
Without waiting for him to say yes or now I took Ally by her arm.
‘’What are you going to do?’’
‘’Waterrrrr.’’
‘’If you want something you can ask me, don’t walk away without saying, and you can’t drink water out the bathroom of a plane.’’
A little mad I walked with her back to our seats.
‘’sorry, I am back.’’
‘’’When you will be in LA?’’
I looked at my watch.
‘’I think at 17.00. Why? You want to have dinner with us? If you want to you can come.’’
‘’uhm.. if I come at 19.30 is that okay?’’
I thought about the time different and about the bed time for Ally.
‘’Yes, you can come. But then will Ally not eat with us. She needs to go to bed.’’
‘’that’s okay, then I will see her tomorrow or something.’’
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10-20-2007, 06:00 AM
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