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10-11-2007, 12:14 PM
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a drama called life
Since I love writting I couldn't wait for two weeks to start with an new story. If you had read one of my storys (''the surprise'' & ''A long way to go'') you will know that I love a little drama and some love  please tell me if you like it or not.
(And since I am from Holland and have dylexia I know my English is far from good, but if I keep making the same mistakes please tell me  )
‘’What is your problem!!!’’
‘’YOU!! You are always the problem!’’
‘’Avril, stay here, don’t you dare to walk away!!!’’
‘’I am going where ever I want to go!!!!’’
‘’Bitch all you do is turning your back at me, that’s it. I don’t get any more and any less.’’
She was getting me pissed like she always did. She was so damn good in making me mad at her. Like she wanted me to get mad. Everything that I wanted her to do she didn’t do, or just did it wrong.
‘’Get back here, GET BACK HERE.’’ My voice came far above Avril’s screaming. But she didn’t want to listen end gave me a punch in my face, I must say it did hurt me. ‘’Why did you do that?!!’’ I graphed her arm and pushed her hard against the wall. ‘’Don’t you ever dare to hit me again, you got that??!!!’’ My hand was thigh around Avril’s arm, and I knew it was hurting her, but it wasn’t my problem. Avril got away from me and walked over to the kitchen. My feelings told we what she was going to do, but I hopped I was wrong. With the knife in her hands she walked to me and pointed it at me. ‘’Don’t you dare to tread me like that!!!’’ She had less control over the knife and while she gave me some other bad names I pulled the knife out of her hand. Just in one second I put my arm around her and held her against my body, just in the way she couldn’t move. I put the knife on her throat. With my voice more down but still on treating way I said. ‘’If you ever dare to hurt me, I will find you.’’ I felt her body shacking and tears run down her face. ‘’MOMMY!!!!! No yelling.’’ I heard Ally walking around upstairs. Quick I put down the knife and let go of her mother. Avril run upstairs to take care of her 3 year old. This fight was ended for today, but we knew that it would never end for real.
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10-11-2007, 12:24 PM
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OMG was this Avril and Deryck faighting or someone else and Avril fighting. I hope not Avril and Deryck 
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10-11-2007, 12:26 PM
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OMG is this about Avril and Deryck, if so I aint reading it
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well, you have to read to find out
so, can I count one reader in? 
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10-11-2007, 12:29 PM
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No sorry i'm going to read it FOR SURE.. I'm addicted to this kind of stories.
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10-11-2007, 12:33 PM
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you can count two readers in.!!!!  i'm totally reading it.! ..love your fan fics.! :]
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10-11-2007, 02:26 PM
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^^thank you! 
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10-11-2007, 03:17 PM
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3 readers!!!
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Light a fire and write a sonnet pin your hopes and your dreams upon it
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10-11-2007, 08:08 PM
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4 readers!
(btw i really don't comment a lot but you can be sure i'm reading  )
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10-11-2007, 08:48 PM
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