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Old 10-20-2007, 10:34 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey guys i`m think in start a fanfiction but the problem is i`m bazilian so my english is really bad and i neve write a fanfictin before so any help is welcome


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I canīt belive Evan just told me that he loves me . How could he say something like that i`m with Deryck now.
Shit why can`t i jut forget about him


- Avril the pizza is here - called Deryck from downstairs
- OK just a second- I said changing my shirt

When i came in the kitchen i had a surprise: There was a lot of candles and was playing alove song.
-OMG!!! Deryck what is that for- i said amazed.
- I just want to show how much i love you, but if you don`t like...-he said before i cut him off
- No ,no i love it- i said kissing him

Dann he`s so sweet and i love him so much but why the hell can`t i stop think about what Evan told me.




So guys what do you think?? Sould i go on?
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Old 10-20-2007, 10:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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continue it u gotta i want to know what happens now
p.s luv the way u started it off
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Old 10-20-2007, 10:58 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Keep on writing this story please, you have a reader here wich is very strange because normally I don't like evril stories.
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one advise

write it like this use the ''...''

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Avril

I can´t belive Evan just told me that he loves me . How could he say something like that i`m with Deryck now.
Shit why can`t i jut forget about him


''Avril the pizza is here'' called Deryck from downstairs
''OK just a second'' I said changing my shirt

When I came in the kitchen I had a surprise: There was a lot of candles and was playing alove song.
''OMG!!! Deryck what is that for'' I said amazed.
''I just want to show how much i love you, but if you don`t like...''he said before I cut him off
''No ,no I love it'' I said kissing him
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Old 10-20-2007, 11:11 AM   #5 (permalink)
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u have 3 readers already woooo continue the story woooo
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thanks guys
i will continue
thanks for the adivise bunny i`ll try it
and morenor don`t worry it`s not an evril storie
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wooo a update might be coming yayyyy i thought this was a evril story to but avryck is good 2 there is like no evril storys on here i think someone should make one
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Nice story! btw avrilrocks4lyf, I had a sort-of-evril story in mind... not sure if I post it or not, since I don't have much of an idea of what to do in the middle (i always make the beggining and the end of the stories before I think of what happens)
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