A long way to go [part 2]

[bunny]

Some of you may have been reading my story ''a long way to go'' there will come a part 2 (yay) but first I need to know if there are any people in for it? Like if they will read it or not.

And for the people that didn't read ''A long way to go'' this ''part'' will be very easy to read even if you didn't read the first part. It's not that you have to read it to understand this part. But for you I will write down in just a few lines where it goes about.

[Morenor]

but first I need to know if there are any people in for it?

Me !!!!!!!!

[SweetElf]

I'm ABSOLUTELY going to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[White Night Fantasy]

me!!!

[bunny]

this is in a few lines where ''a long way to go'' went about

-Avril is/was cutting herself
-Deryck loved alcohol and drugs a little to much
-found eachother
-moved to LA to start a new life
-Loved each other got engaged
-Avril got pregnant
-She cut herself in the belly, baby died
-She stopped talking, eating, she just didn't react at anything
-She got in a pshyco hospital
-A man kept coming in her room, he loved her but she couldn't talk or react on him
-Man kidnept her
-Deryck gets hopeless. After awhile falls in love with a police woman
-When they get married Avril walks in (right before Deryck can say ''I do'')
-They come back together
-Deryck ask Avril to marry, but she says no
-Avril leaves because she wants to get her life back to normal and thinks she has to do that on her own.

That's about it. As you can see I love 3 things
1. Love
2. Drama
3. Bad endings

So your warrned. One more thing I live in Holland, have dyslexia so my English is far from perfect. If I keep making the same mistakes, please tell me, I love to learn

[Seyary_Minamoto]

I'll be sure to say this time, I guess I passed by a lot of your mistakes in the other stories. Now start the typing and post the so long waited new update!XDXDXD YAY!!! I knew this had to come!

[bunny]

An other day, an other long never ending day. My brains died 6 months ago. But my body was still moving on. Or at least what was left of it. Drugs alcohol and parties ruined everything that was left of it. There was nothing left over from the guy I used to be. My soul was empty and my heart was broken. My friends had turned there back at me. Only my closed friends Cone and Steve where still seeing me. But I knew they didn’t understood me. Maybe if I would have tried more, that they would stay with me. But it didn’t care anymore. A few years ago I would call myself crazy think like this. But since Avril left me I didn’t care about anything. I had been trying to chance myself. But after just one week I had noticed that nothing in my body wanted or had the power to chance. I simply gave up. I used to see light in live but now I only saw a big dark hole. And there was nothing that only looked as light in it. I took a deep breath and looked at my messed up face in the mirror. This is how my life would look like. With a beaten face, using drugs and being alone. Alone with a memoir of a girl who left me with a broken heart. A tear run down my face. This was the first one. The first tear in 6 months. A tear of anger at tear of fair. But most of all a tear of love.

[SweetElf]

YAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's back!!!!!!!!