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12-29-2007, 09:41 AM
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12-29-2007, 09:50 AM
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12-29-2007, 09:54 AM
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12-29-2007, 10:38 AM
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" Deryck are you crazy ??" Tom said as I stopped harshly as I reached siggy's bar.
" No I'm not " I said stepping out of the car as the other cars stopped beside our car.
" Whibley !! You drove here like a maniac, why are you hurrying so much " The boss said stepping out of one car and started to yell at me.
" Just to do my job " I said lying to his face and turned around so I saw Siggy's bar, it was exactly like it was last night, the same shithole. I glanced at the clock and saw it was 2 pm. She was probably there.
" Give me the speakerphone " The boss said to his assintant as he pulled it out of his arms.
" OK How does this thing work " He said trying to use it but couldn't, we all laughed at him.
" Stop laughing you idiots, and get back to work !!" He said yelling at us as we got back to work.
" He really is in a bad mood today " Tom said wispering in my ear, it was like I didn't hear him. I was starting at the bar, thinking what if Avril was in there.
" What is the matter with you today Der " He said looking strangly at me.
" Seriously you can tell me anything, we have been working together for almost 4 years. Deryck tell me " Tom said as I turned towards him from looking at that house.
" You really want to know " I said looking at him as he nodded.
" You remember the girl that I was talking to in the question room B, the one that had been taken for a lot of things " I said looking at him as he nooded. I wondered if I should continue.
" I gave her my cell phone number if she needed help " I said looking back at the house so I wouldn't see his reactions.
" Deryck ! hhhmm you know that isn't allowed " He said quietly after he had said my name way to loud.
" I know, but I knew she needed help " I said looking at the house.
" And why has that any connections to this hostage situa... OMG do you think she is in there " He said looking at the house with me.
" I don't know Tom, I don't know " I said looking at the house as I saw a man walking out with a girl in front of him pointing a gun to her head.
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12-29-2007, 10:44 AM
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Member of the week August 17th - 23rd August 2008 Blend made by me, avater made by Sylvia Thank you Avril Lavigne 4th June 2008 London The Best Damn Tour I was there!!!
My Family Iva and Ida are my Daughters, Avie and Jeanette aremy granddaughters, Beautiful Tragedy is my aunt twice removed and is also Iva Godmother
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12-29-2007, 10:59 AM
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I like this story!
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To William Cheeks may you rest in peace, 1990-July 4 2007! (William was a friend of mine sadly no one relised he was hurting and on July 4th he took his life he was only 16. May we try to reach out to friends and other people and help save lives.)
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12-29-2007, 12:31 PM
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" Deryck is that her " Tom said taking up his gun and point towards the man as every other cop there did the same.
" No it isn't " I said taking up my gun also.
" Put the gun down, we are not here to harm you, just put the gun down so the girl will be save " The boss said in the speakerphone.
" I'm in a good shot boss, should I take him " Tom said looking at the boss. Tom was the best sniper of all other police officers, he had very angle at the shooter even if the shooter had a victim in front of him, he could still get him, in the leg or in the head or just anywhere else.
" No don't " He said looking at the shooter.
" What do you want ?" The boss said again in the speaker phone.
" I want our fellow canadians to be realesed from prison or we will kill everybody in here " He said trigging the gun as the girl started to get more scared.
" What did the canadians do ?" My boss asked in the speakerphone.
" Like you don't know " The shooter said shaking his head at us.
" We don't " Tom said wispering into my ear as the boss said the exact same thing.
" I'm not gonna tell you, and this girl is gonna be killed in 30 minutes if they wont get out " He said backing into the house and shutting the door behind him.
" OK guys, I have gotten a call from the prison saying that the canadians murdered 50 people in a local college here nearby. We wont let them realese them, so we have to get inside " The boss said poiting to the house.
" Are you sure ?" His assistant said nervous.
" Yes I'm sure. So the best officers are going to go in and get the hostiges out ok ?" He said as we all nodded, we had to do it to make sure all Americans would be alright, it was our job to make sure all americans would be ok.
" Whibley, Rodriguez, Thomson, Jackson, Adams, Hobbs, Williams, Cruise. You are going in, the gear is over there " The boss said pointing to the car with all our equipment inside.
" Yay, we got to go " Tom said as we walked towards the car.
" Its not a happy thing we have to go inside " I said looking at him strangly. Was it really a happy thing to go inside ??
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OK guys, here's an update and I'll write one more today if I get enought comments, and that is 3+ 
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12-29-2007, 12:51 PM
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