My World: The life of a teenager girl.

[ThePrincess]

Here is my new project. It's called My World: The life of a teenager girl. This doesn't means that Avryck Fanfiction is done, this is just a couple of ideas I had a few days ago that I couldn't fit on it.

This update took 4 days to write (and morenor can confirme it) so I hope you like it.

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It's 9 am, Christmas morning. No shadows, no reflections there. A brown haired girl with 15 years walked into the living room of her house. The furniture was of a dark brown and was quite simple. There was a couch on the centre of the room on the centre of the small room and in front of it was an old television. At the couch's left side was a big fireplace, that occupied the most part of the room, and at the right side was a big table with 6 chairs.
The girl's green eyes analysed the room like if she was searching something. They stopped when the visualized on the table, a plate with chocolate cookies on it and a glass of milk right beside it. She was starving so she walked to the plate and grabbed a cookie and ate it. It felt so good to her to her stomach that she eaten all the food.
'Jeez, I'm full.' She murmured to herself, smiling of satisfaction.
She was stiil holding the glass when someone placed his on her shoulder. The glass fell to the floor by the shock, broking into pieces. She turned around - scared and her heart beating quickly - to see who the new occupant of the room was.
'Evan!' She said loudly, quickly regretting 'cause her mom had heard it and called her from the top floor. 'Avril? What happened? Who's there with you?'
'Nobody, mom! It's just the TV!' She said nervously.
She waited until she was certain that her mom was asleep again and gasped of relief. Avril turned again to Evan and by her gaze she was not happy.
'Sorry, I didn't wanna scare you.' He said without making any movement.
'What are you doing here?' She asked ignoring his apologizes and maintaining her furious gaze.
'I wanted to surprise you, babe.' Evan said smiling in an attempt to make everything ok.
'Well I don't like this surprise.' Avril said turning her back to him to cover the big smile that was drawn in her face but another question came to her mind. 'How did you get in?'
'Well the back door is unlocked.'
'Ok but next time tell me something.' She said walking towards the boy.
The boy was tall has her and thin too. His brown hair shined in the black room and fell graciously on his back. A vanilla aroma came from his body and made her body shake.
'What do you want with me?' Evan asked sarcastically.
'You know what I want. You don't even need to ask.' She said getting closer to Evan.
The smile drawn in Evan's quickly increased as he got into a passionate kiss gave by Avril. He didn't loose time. He kissed her back and tried to get the things a bit hotter.
'What are you doing?' Avril said making an horror face and pushing him out. 'I'm doing what you want. If you want sex I'll give sex.' Evan said naturally and gazing at her like if she was crazy.
Avril stayed in her place, firm, with her mouth open, shocked for what he had just said.
He got closer to her again. She saw he wouldn't quit that easily and slapped his face. He just looked at her, indignant about what she had done.
'You'll regret for that.' Evan said.
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If you want to gave suggestion or correct some mispellings, do it!

[Morenor]

Great work dear, very good and there was some misspellings but I don't have the time to find them, but just so you know I have always time to correct your updates, I'm your beta reader and mother and all

[ThePrincess]

So nobody like it? ohhhh....

[CrazyCas]

Update!! i really want an update. im going to bed now but ill read it as soon as i can!!

[Justyn The Sk8ter Boi]

Good job, my daughter.

I think it's " his apologies" instead of " his apologizes".. I don't know. Hope you won't mind it.

[ThePrincess]

Originally Posted by Justyn The Sk8ter Boi

Good job, my daughter.

I think it's " his apologies" instead of " his apologizes".. I don't know. Hope you won't mind it.

Of course I don't mind. As you said "Human learn from their mistakes".

[ThePrincess]

‘Why would I regret?’ Avril said not fearing him. ‘Remember our conversation?’

(Flashback)

‘Honey, I don’t want to do it yet. I don’t feel ready for it.’ Avril said.
‘Ok, we’ll wait.’ Evan said taking is hand from Avril’s chest and walking out of the room.
Avril could see that he was, not sad, but angry.
‘Babe, I’m sorry.’ She said felling she shouldn’t be asking for forgiveness; after all he had to respect her decisions.
‘It’s ok, stund muffin.’ He said grinning to her and putting his black trainers on.
She looked at him, afraid he wanted to break up with her after this but she stayed a bit more relaxed when he said ‘I’ll be back in 10 minutes. I’ll get something for you to eat.’
She nodded. When Evan left the room, she gave a look around her.
This was the first time she was in his house and when she first met him, he told her that his room was quite a lot bigger.
The room was small but cosy. A poster of the Metallica was on the wall right in front of his bed. On the bed right side was his bedside table and at the left side was a door who lead to his wardrobe.
She was about to get off the bed when Evan returned and in his arms he bring a tray with strawberries covered with chocolate and a banana milkshake.
‘Hmm... That looks delicious.’ Avril said sitting and placing the tray in her legs.

(End of Flashback)

‘We never had a conversation, you whore.’ Evan said giving me a punch in my face and kicking me in the belly.
‘Stop it! Help me!’ Avril screamed trying to get rid of Evan’s kicks.
‘Shut up, motherfucker.’ He said grabbing her by the neck and pointing a knife at it.
‘Evan, stop!’ She said starting crying.
Evan opened his mouth to talk but as both heard people getting here from the top floor, he rushed to get out of the house. In the middle of the confusion Avril got free of him and ran to her brother’s arms.
‘Matt, it’s him!’ She said hugging the boy. He had short blond hair and beautiful blue eyes. He was much taller than her spite of he was just one year older than her.
‘Who?’ He asked worried and placing his hands on Avril face.
She tried to say something but Evan rant in their direction and grabbed her by the arm.
‘You’re coming with me, princess.’ He said and then turning back to Avril’s brother and to her mom, who had just arrived. The wrinkles in Judy Lavigne’s face were increasing as she made panic expressions.
‘You’ll stay quit at home with you mommy and with your little sister, understood?’ He said pointing the knife to Avril’s neck and walking slowly backwards towards to the hall. ‘And don’t call the police or I kill her.’
Evan opened the door and left the house leaving behind a worried brother and shocked mother.

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Here is my 2nd update. I hope you like (sorry mom for not sending it to you before but I need to test my writting skills) and I hope I get more comments...

[Justyn The Sk8ter Boi]

Damn! Evan! what the hell are you doing? Let me kill him.xD

[Morenor]

He is so dead why do I always want to kill Evan in these fics is beyond me