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03-25-2008, 10:37 AM
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^ well in my case it was not the language or the spelling or anything like that, it was a real life story, and seriously, I had no realitly check in that, it was such a horrible story.. So... and if anybody goes and check out that story ( not saying the name ) they wont see the light again..  just kidding... but don't check on the story 
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03-25-2008, 10:40 AM
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#167 (permalink)
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^^ LOL
Anyway, I LOVE both SSS and NN, but I have to admit I like Nobody's Normal even more 
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03-25-2008, 10:45 AM
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New update...
Avril’s POV.
“Avril! Avril” I hear someone calling me and shaking me. I open my eyes and I see Deryck in front of me. I try to reach my head, but wow, it’s really heavy. I lay it on my pillow and close my eyes again. I don’t want to wake up. It’s good here. The bed is warm, and it’s really soft… I’m almost dreaming again…
“AVRIL! You need to wake up! It’s almost eleven! You said the bus is leaving just after midday, so as hard as it is, you need to wake up.” He explains.
“FUCK!” I get up quickly, but I almost fall into the floor. I’m really with a big headache. But why? I can’t remember…then suddenly all comes to my head like a flash. Last night…all the champagne.
“Calm down, we still have time.” Deryck says and helps me to go to the bathroom.
“Der, I really need a Tylenol”. I say lowly. God, I hate hangovers. I need to remember them before drinking.
“Oh My God, Avril! Where were you?” Sofi asks me when I enter the parking where the bus is. “Everybody is crazy looking for you! You can’t disappear like that!”
“I’m sorry… I hang out last night with Deryck, and we decided to go to a hotel instead of spent the night at the bus. I thought I would be here early, but we woke up late…” I explain. I’m still with a big headache, even after the two Tylenols and a cup of coffee.
“Ok, you are here now, that’s what matters. The bus is leaving in 30 minutes. You should go there.” She warns me.
“You need to go too, don’t you?” I ask Deryck while we are walking towards the bus. He is going to play in Moncton, and I’m going to Vancouver. The next time we’ll be able to see each other again is on his birthday, two weeks from now.
“Yeah… I still need to find Cone, Steve and Jess.” He says. Oh yeah. And Jessica. Ew.
“I don’t want you to go…” I start to say. Why is it so hard to say goodbye? Will it always be like this?
“Please, Av, don’t begin with it. We are going to see each other again soon.” He looks at his watch. “Now, you need to go. Me too.” He gives me a kiss. “I love you.”
“I love you too.” I say and enter the bus.
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If I have some comments I'll update again later 
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03-25-2008, 11:00 AM
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#169 (permalink)
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Aww cute !!
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03-25-2008, 11:17 AM
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wow ok two updates the first one was cute, the second one was soo cute and hot lol and this one was cute and abit cheesy
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03-25-2008, 12:42 PM
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loved it!!!

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03-25-2008, 01:47 PM
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Does "cheesy" mean poor quality?
2 more comments and I update. Big One. 
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03-25-2008, 01:59 PM
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mih (can i call you mih?? lol )
your story is awesome and i love to read it 
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03-25-2008, 02:00 PM
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