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04-01-2008, 08:13 AM
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Originally Posted by misstypea
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I'm going to update later 
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ok cant wait 
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04-01-2008, 10:00 AM
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New Update:
Deryck’s POV
I pay the cab and run to the house. When I enter the living room I see Michelle sitting on the couch dialing someone on the phone.
“Is she here?” I ask without even saying “Hello, how are you?”, I’m really worried. I really hope she is. It’s raining so heavy out there and it’s really dangerous to drive with the weather like this, especially Avril, who is probably bad after the airport scene.
“No… I’m trying to call her, but she is not answering.” Michelle looks at me. “Can you tell me now what’s going on?”
“It’s… when Avril arrived at the airport she saw something… and it turns out to be a big confusion! I try to catch her, but she run and I thought she would come home. I’ll explain later. We need to find her.” I say sadly.
“Oh my God! She is alone! It’s raining a lot, but where would she go?” She says worried too.
“I don’t know! Where is the tour bus? I could seek her there and you could look for her at the streets around the airport. I’ll ask James to go with you.” I say. James is a guy who works at our house, and I feel better if Michelle doesn’t leave alone.
“Ok, so, let’s go.” She agrees and we take our cars.
Michelle’s POV
James is driving while I’m trying to think where Avril can be. I don’t know what she saw at the airport, but it certain wasn’t nice, which makes me really sad. She was so excited to meet Deryck and tell him about the baby, which, of course, she didn’t. Now she can be in the middle of nowhere, alone and pregnant. I really hope we can find her. She can’t go really far with the rain.
“I can hardly see anything, Ms. Lavigne.” James says. “Where do you want to go?”
We need to choose left or right, and I say “Left”, just because I need to choose one.
We drive for more fifteen minutes when I finally see a car stopped in front of an abandon house. It’s Avril’s car. Finally.
“Stop, James! It’s her! It’s her!” I say pointing the car and he stops the car behind hers.
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Comment and I'll update again later 
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04-01-2008, 10:32 AM
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Wow.. update... again... now... soon... whenever... just quick 
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04-01-2008, 10:48 AM
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update!
that was sweet
your a ggood writter!
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04-01-2008, 10:49 AM
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yeahhh updateeee
this is getting good

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04-01-2008, 10:52 AM
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I'm going to my tennis practice soon and when I come back I'll update. 
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04-01-2008, 10:54 AM
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YAYAYAYAY!
lol i love how i hate reading but
im like reading this..... 
haha
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04-01-2008, 10:56 AM
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How can you hate to read? 
I'm a completely book crazy since I was like, 9.
I really love to read.
And I'm really glad you like this story 
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04-01-2008, 10:58 AM
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lol ive never been the reader type... LOL
well if i would find a book thats not boring id read..
or if its about avril then i can read hahah
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04-01-2008, 11:04 AM
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