05-13-2008, 11:22 AM
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Total Points: 99,578.00 Donate | New Update: Deryck’s POV “Can’t you go faster?” Avril screams crankily. Hormones, Deryck, Hormones, I say to myself. “Babe, it’s snowing, it’s dangerous if I drive faster, the car can slide.” I say softly. She squeezes the car seats with pain. I would do anything to make her feel better. “It hurts so much!” She yells with tears running down her face. “Calm down, Av… breath in, breath out, just like we did at those Lamaze classes…” I try to calm her. We went to a lot of Lamaze classes these last days, but now it looks like it doesn’t help at all. “IT DOESN’T WORK! I’m trying to do it since the first contraction! Oh no…” She says and another contraction comes. Now that I’m seeing how hurtful it is to have a baby, I love and respect my mother more than ever. I continue to drive and them I see a plate that makes my heart freezes. The street is blocked by the snow, and there's no way a car or a person can get through it. “Why did you stop?” Avril asks weakly. She is sweating so much and her hair is completely wet. “I- I can’t pass through the snow…” I say nervously. “What?????? You need to do something! You did it to me! You and your stupid penis full of sperms! Do something!” She complains and holds her bump again. “Unfortunately they still didn’t make cars that can fly.” I say ironically and she narrows her eyes at me. “Sorry.” Another contraction, another scream of pain. “W-E A-R-E N-E-V-E-R G-O-I-N-G T-O H-A-V-E S-E-X A-G-A-I-N, DERYCK JAYSON WHIBLEY!” She screams before another contraction. If Avril, my Avril, is about to give up sex, it really, really must hurts. “Calm down, babe… everything is going to be fine… in a few moments we are going to have our daughter in our arms.” I stroke her hair. She opens a little smile when I say that. “I want her out of me now…” She sniffs and leans her head on my chest. “I don’t want my baby to born in a car.” She cries. I hate seeing her like this. I hate. I need to do something, I need to find help. Somebody has to live around here. “Avril, I’ll leave for a minute and try to find help.” I say sadly, I don’t want to leave her alone, but there is no way I can bring this kid to the world… only looking at blood can make me pass out. Avril needs someone who can help her with the labor. “Are you going to leave me?” She says in pain. It breaks my heart. “Please, Deryck… I need you with me.” “I have to, babe… as you said, you can’t have the baby in the car…” I give her cell phone to her. “If something, anything happens, call me. You just need to press send; my number is already the first one in the list.” “Something worse than what is already happening?” She asks between the tears. I kiss her. “I love you. Please, be strong.” I say with my heart broken to leave her there alone. “Be fast, please.” She begs me and I nod. I take a last look at her and leave the car. |
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05-13-2008, 11:26 AM
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cannot wait for tomorrow's update! |
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05-13-2008, 11:34 AM
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and the we-are-never-gonna-have-sex-again thing was funny 
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05-13-2008, 03:25 PM
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05-13-2008, 03:28 PM
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but you've got many of this story, misstypea! |
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05-13-2008, 04:10 PM
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HAHA 
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05-13-2008, 04:10 PM
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i love the part where avril says "you did this to me! you and your stupid penis full of sperm!" hahaha...  |
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05-13-2008, 04:58 PM
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that one was amazing lol
cant wait for tomorrows 
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05-13-2008, 05:32 PM
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But Deryck can do this! He must help!
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05-13-2008, 07:51 PM
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him and his penis full of sperm XD
update soon please, i cant wait
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05-13-2008, 08:07 PM
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05-13-2008, 08:42 PM
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