I'm not 100% sure. I only have 2 paragraphs so far, I have atleast 2 story lines thought up though; but i'm not so good at getting it onto paper. It'll get there in the enddd.

I'm trying to make this story
alot more descriptive, as most books sometimes have like several pages of descriptiveness... well, i dont know.. i dont read books, but i read Of Mice and Men for high school, and the description in that went on for pages before the scene even started.
So be expecting lots of description.
and also, the opening scenes are set in London.
