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Strictly Not Suitable For Young Readers.
So just to remind all of yous, alot of the previous updates were part of a 'Flashback', so to recap where we left off, Chris woke up in New York...
I look back at Faye as she lies on the bed still asleep, the sun slowly creeps through the window as it becomes more visible over the New York skyline. I hear a slight groaning as Faye began to wake up, ten minutes later she finally decides to open her beautiful eyes. I lied next to her, watching her look bemused, “Whaattt, where am I?”
I smiled and said, “We came to New York for a couple of days… remember?”
She smiled and rolled over to me, “Oh yeah, how could I forget after last night!”
A couple, holding each other, burst into the apartment in fits of laughter. A short, 4”9 girl stands in the empty living room, her long, curly Auburn hair highlighted by the sunlight which shines through the cracks in the blinds which block the window. Realising that there is no one else home the couple look each other in the eye, Abigail speaks out “Hey Beth there’s no one else here…” She says, suggestively.
A slightly taller figure than Abigail moves towards the girl who she believes to be the love of her life, long blonde hair and blue eyes lighten up the face which only requires a thin layer of make-up. Beth looks deeply into Abigail’s gorgeous brown eyes, silence echoes throughout the apartment as the couple begin to make out; Beth’s fingertips explore Abi’s body as they gradually make their way lower down. Beth removes Abigail’s top, she stares at her large breasts, “mmm”, Abigail giggles and starts to undress Beth, within seconds the couple were fully nude and on the bed. Beth’s head lay in her lover’s crotch as Abigail lets out sighs of pleasure; the couple were so in love that they hadn’t experienced anything even reaching ‘similar’ to this. The sky darkened as night took control of day, the moon shined down on the couple through the window which sat above them. The two lovers lay clothe-less on the bed, all to be seen, the glowing light from the stars in the sky reflects off of the moist body parts which lay still as the girls sleep holding each other, in one an others arms.
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04-25-2008, 10:35 AM
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And thus concludes the chapter, which will from now on be known as...."The Average Weekend at my House."
Very nice update. Very descriptive. 
Now UpPpPpPpDaTe.....

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04-25-2008, 11:05 AM
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 Thanks yous Abi. Can't update at the moment  Don't have enough written. Sorry ;[ I'll try to write more tomorrow maybe. I might later if I feel like it. I'll deffinately have another update by sunday 
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The scent of coffee enters the lungs of the two thirty eight year-olds as they enter the Starbucks coffee house, the two sit gazing into each others eyes as they talk for hours.
“Do you remember our wedding day?” Faye asked Chris, whilst in a state of daze.
“Yeah, god that was so long ago now, nineteen years.”
“Sierra and Abigail looked so cute in their little dresses!” Faye was grinning as Chris got distracted by a message on his phone. “Who’s that?” Faye asked still smiling. The message was from Abigail telling them to call her as soon as possible. Chris called her before even answering Faye, “What’s wrong?” no greetings, they got straight the point.
“It’s Sierra, she’s just been rushed to hospital. She might not make it.” Chris went into a state of shock and was speechless; Faye grabbed the phone off him and started speaking to Abigail.
“What is it?!” She screamed in panic.
“Sierra’s been rushed to hospital. She just went white and kinda fainted. It was so weird and sudden. She hasn’t been sick in months.” Abigail remained calm as Faye began to realise what may have happened to her daughter.
“Oh fuck! We’ll be there as soon as we can.” She hung up the phone, grabbed Chris’s hand and pulled him out of the coffee house; they made their way to the airport as quick as they could and got on the next flight to Calgary. “She’ll be okay, she’ll make it through. There’s nothing you can do now, just keep holding on.”
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Damn it Chris if you kill me!!!!!!!!!! Oh if you kill me I can go to my story and kill you!!!!!!
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LOL. :P Don't worry I won't kill 'you'... or will i?

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Oh snap. 
How dramatic!!!!!!!!!!
What happened to her?????
There is No Dying Allowed......in this story 
UppppppppDaaaaaaTeeeeee.
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Introducing... Abigail
Dodging other vehicles by only centre metres the ambulance sways from side to side, as we speed through the traffic Sierra began to shake, her eyes darting from one side to another, blood poured from her nose and all sorts of fluids were puked up. I screamed and was shaking almost as much as her. My sister was dying right in front of me, and there was nothing I could do to help. Her heart stopped, No pulse, No thoughts, No memory, nothing. She was no longer with us. Her were eyes still wide open starring at me. I screamed at the paramedics, “Do something then!”
The women replied calmly, “We don’t have the correct equipment with us.”
I then couldn’t help but scream at her again, “You complete fuckers! You’re supposed to save lives!” She looked down in disgrace, with herself. By now we were just arriving at the hospital.

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