From Sunrise to Sunset

[Melody Moonwalk]

Yeah yeah, i'm working on it, you dont' want it to be rushed do ya otherwise it'll be crap.

I'm gunna try to come to some sort of conclusion soon, 'cause I really don't want it to be one of these stories that people just keep on writing with no ending in mind... y'know.
Stories are meant to have endings! :P
but don't worry, that may not be for a short while yet, I'll think of how to end it, and then work up to it. etc etc.
I'll try to make it somewhat a happy ending

After that i'm gunna start working on another novel. I already have a few ideas in mind, ish.

[Melody Moonwalk]

CHANGES TO CHARACTER NAMES
IMPORTANT - MUST READ

As of now, Chris and Faye will be known as Matt and Fran.
I know you all won't be happy about this, but i'm changing their names for my own personal reasons. I don't want to - but I feel I need to.
I won't bother going back and changing all the previous posts.


Sorry.

[Melody Moonwalk]

It occured to be earlier that colour-blind people wouldn't be able to differentiate between the different characters - so i've brought back the names. Although I don't think there's any colour-blind people reading this...? Oh wellll. :P
(I've left the Narrator without a title because it's written in the third person, so it should be more obvious.)

Update...

abigail
I sat glaring at the TV, with Sierra next to me. The doctors told her she should probably get some rest, so she got to laze around the apartment for a couple of weeks. My head was all over the place, I couldn’t help but worry about my little sister. The couch vibrated as Sierra received a message on her phone, “Who’s that?” I asked.
“It’s Dylan.” She said with a grin.
“Y’know what, I don’t actually know how you two met…”

The sun’s rays shine down into the deep ocean, reflecting onto the face of a young beauty. A light breeze of air sweeps through her long, luscious, brunette hair; her eyes glisten, mirroring the action of the calm ocean. The smooth, soft skin which clings to her body is darkened as a figure appears in front of the beauty which lay on the beach. “Hey.” A voice breaks through the silence.
The girl, lying on her back with her eyes closed, bluntly and slowly replies, “Yeah yeah, you think I’m hot. Whatever.” The guy, still standing over the girl, chuckles,
“Haha, well now you mention it...” implying that he agrees, he changes the subject, “but why you out here on the beach? Trying to catch a tan… in January?!”
Propping herself up on her elbows; she looks up at the guy speaking to her, squinting to keep the sun out her eyes, “Dude, if the sun’s out, you can get a tan… right?” her face turns to a look of confusion as she questions what she’s just said.
“I suppose… but it’s freezing, and you’re half naked. What the hell…”
“Yeah well” The girl says, loosing interest.
“What’s your name?” The guy says whilst sitting down next to his newly found friend.
“Sierra” She says, turning to look at him; a smile creeps to her face. “What’s yours?”
“Dylan… you wanna go grab some coffee or something?” He says whilst grinning.
“I’m not really into the whole sitting-in-a-coffee-shop-for-hours-talking-thing.” Sierra says, with a hint of a giggle in her voice.
“Yeah, me neither. I don’t even like coffee! I just thought all girls were into that. Haha.” He looks down, avoiding eye-contact, feeling slightly embarrassed.
“You wanna come to my place?” Sierra says, confidently, gazing into Dylan’s eyes.
“Wow. Erm. I don’t know… I have this… thing.” Unsure of what to say, Dylan remains in the state of avoiding eye-contact.
“Hey c’mon, what’s the problem?” Sierra starts to frown slightly, in confusion. Dylan says nothing, but looks up; the two of them looks deeply into one another’s eyes, after a moment of silence Dylan slowly moved towards Sierra. Their lips met as the seed of their love was planted within their hearts.

Quick reminder - Sierra was still living in Brighton (England) when she met Dylan. (:

[Seyary_Minamoto]

Nice! And the name changes don't bother me too much... its okay! And I liked this update, a lot. The coffee thingy was hilarious!

[Melody Moonwalk]

Haha i'm glad you liked it :P
Thanks.

Hmmm. I'm strugling to think of how I could end this. I want it to be happy, but... I dunno. Maybe i'll end it with a death or something.
I can't think of a happy ending that would be a good ending, i mean like, everything sorting itself out and everything being happy is boring, to be honest.

[Seyary_Minamoto]

Then make a dramatically happy ending, you know, like Dana going back suddenly, and everyone cries and stuff like that XD

[Melody Moonwalk]

Hmm maybe. I'm gunna make it happy but also sad.