My first song , avirl lavigne inspired

[dr.korytco]

Foreword: It's my first attempt at music, so go easy please.


Diary !
(Na- ha- na- ha
Oh yah
na -ha- na- ha
Oh yah )
You aint my boy, boy you aint my boy
(Look , look here , these are my words, my words so clear.
Right here on the page , my story , I write my self in,
my story, my story is so near .
I voice my trace ,follow my words , and here comes me face to face.)
Follow my trail , discover me place to place.
Read into my voice, (I speak my words , hear me, hear my story)
(Boy you aint even in this chapter
Boy you just aint good enough for me
Boy you aint good enough for me.
I wont write you in.)
You erased yourself chapters ago
My book is not about 3rd chances.
I only write in-between the lines , .Boy you crossed the line long ago.
(You aint my boy na-ha na-ah ,
Boy, you aint my boy !
Na-ha -na-ha
That's right, you aint my boy,
Boy, you aint my boy.)
Walk , walk away now, boy fall, fall off .
You'll never stick around here no more, this book is closed to you .
(You erased yourself chapters ago
I closed you out,
Boy you don't deserve a 3rd chance.
Boy this aint your book, you are closed out.
This is my book so near, you don't belong here.
The book is closed to you.)
Boy, na-ha-na-ha
Boy, na-ha-na-ha
You aint my boy.

[Hunter S. Bukowski]

music.. music..

where's the music.

[dr.korytco]

In my mind, this is a literature forum is it not? LOL, its in my head, these are lyrics and yes a song in my mind plays out. I would like to think its my imagination but who knows.

Again, peace .

Kinda sounds like it would be a hip-hop song. Good job though

[dr.korytco]

Originally Posted by Running With Scissors

Kinda sounds like it would be a hip-hop song. Good job though

Thanks I was listening to the new album when I made it which is a different sort of Avril than I fell in love with but I still enjoy the album.

[Havril!]

looks good- love to hear it though!

[dr.korytco]

Hey why not, can any girls here sing in a pop , punk manner? IF anyone tries to sing this I guarantee I will try hard to put music to it. Just PM me if you are interested.