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05-24-2008, 07:41 PM
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i just read this whole thing...and i'm SO glad i was bored  this story ROCKS! especially all parts concerning avryck and underwear 
i hope you update soon 
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05-25-2008, 05:35 PM
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The movie continued on…and so did the rain. I constantly looked at him, hoping to catch his eye (which I did several times). His hand had come off my leg and was now back in his own lap. I wanted his hand back on my leg. But this I couldn’t tell him. It would sound weird..and somewhat desperate. The movie finished almost as fast as it had begun. It was now 3:30 in the morning. I looked as him to see him looking at me too. But this time, he wasn’t looking at my face. He was looking lower. I felt uncomfortable for a while. I didn’t like people staring at me as if I was a piece of meat. But I guess it was alright for Deryck to stare. After all, that was what I had wanted him to do for so long.
“What are you looking at?” I questioned.
He caught himself staring and stopped immediately. He looked down for a while (at the floor) and then looked me once again in the eye. It was obvious he was embarrassed for being caught looking. “Oh, um, nothing…it’s just that…”
“It’s just what?” It was so cute to see him so shy to answer me. If only he knew that I didn’t mind…not in the least…not with him.
“It’s just…um….your really pretty.”
I blushed a deep red and sat myself closer to him. I didn’t know whether it was the liquor or the fact that I had wanted him for so long that made me flirty all of a sudden. I looked at him flirtatiously and lifted the lingerie dress a bit higher up (without him noticing) so that my underwear showed a bit. Usually, I would wait months to do something like this, but I just couldn’t help it. It was as if someone else took over my body at that moment. Someone who wasn’t shy at all. It just felt so right…as if nothing could go wrong. Plus, I trusted Deryck..with all my heart. And I sensed he trusted me too.
“How pretty?” I grinned flirtatiously at him. He grinned in the same manner back at me. By this point, we were both flirting with one another. He looked down for a moment and obviously realized that my underwear was showing.
“Um, Avril, your underwear is, uh, showing.” He was such a gentleman. Usually men would take control after seeing something like that. But not Deryck. He really respected me..and all women for that matter.
I answered back more flirty than ever. “I know.” I winked at him. He continued to stare at me until our eyes locked. Then, I felt him come closer to me. I closed my eyes, counting the seconds in my head before the kiss. Excitement built up inside of me. Suddenly, when I thought he had once again stopped short, his lips pressed against mine passionately. The kiss was wonderful. I lost track of time. We had either been kissing for 5 seconds or 5 minutes. But I wasn’t sure. I just knew I wanted it to last. Then, I felt him move away from me. I was at a lost of words and of breath.
Then, he looked at me again. “So, was it what you expected it would be?” He grinned flirtatious at me.
“Um, no.” He looked away, embarrassed, figuring that I hadn’t enjoyed the kiss at all. After a long pause I spoke again. “It was better.”
He looked back at me and smiled. He came closer to me once again. We were about to kiss when a loud bolt of lightning hit the sky. We both jumped.
“Oh my god, that startled me.” I said.
“Yeah, me too.” He looked at me and then at the clock near the T.V. “Oh my god it’s 3:40. I think it’s time we get some rest.”
“Oh, ok.” I looked away disappointed. I wanted to continue the game of lust with him. But, I approved of his wishes. He got up from the couch and started going upstairs. “Wait…um…where am I going to sleep?”
He looked at me, suddenly realizing he had forgotten to tell me that. “Oh..um…I only have one bed and that’s mine…but it has enough room for the both of us if you want to sleep there with me. Or, you could sleep on the couch.”
I refused to sleep on the couch. That was the most uncomfortable place to sleep. I wasn’t exactly sure if sleeping in the same bed with him was a good idea. After all, I was in lingerie already. Things could happen. But, I refused to sleep on the couch. Plus, I wouldn’t exactly mind if anything happened with Deryck. I smiled at him, got up from the couch and walked up to him. I practically threw myself up against him. He look at me with a huge grin. I guess he already knew what my answer was. “I don’t want to sleep on the couch.” I looked at him with huge puppy eyes.
“I understand. I hate sleeping on the couch too.” He looked at me long and hard for a while. I began to get shy. “So….follow me.”
I smiled and began to follow him. But before I could take another step forward, Deryck stopped walking and I bumped into him. He turned around abruptly and pulled me in closer to him. Then, we kissed. During the kiss I felt his hands move from my waist down to my legs. He lifted me up unexpectedly and wrapped my legs around his waist. I giggled and kissed him again and again and again. As we continued to kiss, he led me to his bedroom and gently placed me on the bed.
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05-25-2008, 06:23 PM
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 Oh my god!!!!!!
Updaaaaaaattttteeee!
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05-25-2008, 06:45 PM
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holy crap! i love this story!! that was a great update, by the way 
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05-25-2008, 07:39 PM
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Finally!!
I love how their relation ship is surrounded by Avril's underwear!
LOL
That was amazing!
Avril is a very naughty girl...
And come on, Deryck? Were you going to let the girl sleep in the couch while you were in your soft bed?
I think he had second intentions there...
UPDATE SOON!!!
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05-25-2008, 07:44 PM
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Originally Posted by misstypea
   
Finally!!
I love how their relation ship is surrounded by Avril's underwear!
LOL
That was amazing!
Avril is a very naughty girl...
And come on, Deryck? Were you going to let the girl sleep in the couch while you were in your soft bed?
I think he had second intentions there...
UPDATE SOON!!!
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lol
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05-25-2008, 07:46 PM
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 smut scene coming up?! 
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05-25-2008, 07:46 PM
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I think he was trying to be polite.
He know's he wants to sleep in the same bed as Av. 
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05-27-2008, 09:02 PM
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update coming? 
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05-27-2008, 09:47 PM
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