Better Off Dead?

[Avril Misery]

Okie Dokie. I've been writing this story for a while now, and it has nothing to do with Avril. I don't think it's worthy enough to go on Bandaids, so that's why for now, I'm just gonna post a little summary. And if people seem to want to read it? Then I'll start posting the real thing. Okay, so here's the summary:

It's about this teenage guy named Devie, who's parents died. And was left in the supervision of his careless, older brother, Ryan. Since his parents died, his life has been a living nighmare, and the only one who made him feel better was his bestfriend since Kindergarden, Camelyn. Devie has always been madley in love with Camelyn, but never told her because he didn't want to destory their strong bonded friendship. So can he get his life back together, and finally be happy? Or is he better off dead?

So?

[White Night Fantasy]

I'd probably read it.
Sounds good.

[Avril Misery]

It's not a sappy love story people! ...well have of it isn't.

Also, thanks to you.^

[Av-Lav]

You know I'm going to read it.
Fo sho!

[Avril Misery]

I didn't get too many responces on the summary. But I'm gonna post the first part anyway. When I first typed this story I had it sectioned off in chapters, so I'm gonna do it that way on here, too. Surprise! The chapter names are the names of Avril's songs. ps. The Narrator is Devie, the main character.

Ch.1 "Nobody's Fool"
It's midnight and I just now made my way out of the abandon warehouse that my group of friends and I hang out at. They all left 30 mineuts ago, but I decided to stay by myself a little more longer. The streets were quiet and empty. It was raining hard an hour ago, but now it's very soft - barley raining at all. The streets were wet and shinned from the light of the old street lights. As I past old business buildings, I came across an alley that caught my eye. The image of the alley reminded me of an alley you would see in a movie were a young girl would walk threw and she would be followed by a shadow. I stepped into the alley and I heard the crash of a metal garbage can inside the darkness. I stepped back scared of what might be inside the alley. A mugger, a rabies-filled dog...a bum? I waited to see what would come out, like an idiot. Out of the black wall came a cat, walking towards me.
"Hey alley cat." I said to the cat. It walked up to me and rubbed up against my leg with a purr. "I don't think I want you touching me, cat. I don't want fleas." I said walking away from the alley back onto the road. I walked up to the middle of the road since there were no cars driving, no one outside besides me.
Later on down the road, I saw a cars headlights on the road a long way in front of me. So I got out of the road to the sidewalk. As it got closer I heard the engine of the car rev up. I had no idea what this car was gonna do. As the car got closer I tried to see what the car looked like, but it was going to fast for me to tell. When the car got beside me it slammed on the brakes, leaving black skid marks on the road. That was when I was able to see what the car looked like. It was a maroon, old fashion, Mustang, with the convertable top down.
"Hey Devie! What cha doin'?" said my brother, Ryan, the driver of the Mustang.
"I'm walking home."
"Why are you walking?" Ryan asked me turning off the car.
"How else am I gonna get there?!"
"Weren't you with your friends?"
"Yeah I was. They left before I did."
"Why did you stay by yourself?"
"Because I wanted to!" I said walking up to the car.
"You shouldn't be outside this late by yourself."
"Oh, now you're being responsable? What happened to being responsable when it acually counts?"
"I can be responsable when ever I feel like it! Now get in the car, we're going home."
"No! I'd rather walk then be in a car with you!" I said backing up.
"You are gonna get in this car, if you like it or not!"
"Oh! So now you think you can act like mom and dad to me?! Well newsflash, Ryan! You're not! They're gone! And just because they are, doesn't mean you can boss me around like they used to do."
"Devie...don't go there. Stop acting like a kid, and get in the car. All I wanna do is take you home." Ryan said in a calm voice.
"I want to walk. Can't I just do that?" Ryan sighed then said,
"Yes. You can walk...just be careful."
"I've been okay so far, haven't I?"
"Yes - yes you have. I'll see you at home." Ryan started the car back up, set the car to drive and took off down the road. Towards the direction that I came from. I went back to the sidewalk and continued walking.

[Av-Lav]

Very good so far
If I were Devie....I'd have taken the ride though.
I'm lazy like that.

Can't wait for the update.

[Avril Misery]

Right now he hates his brother's guts. That's why he didn't ride with him.
Thanks for reading it.

[Av-Lav]

Oh.....how stubborn of him.
Can't wait to hear, in more detail, why he hates his guts.

[Avril Misery]

When do you think I should update?
I can update anytime you want, since it's already been typed down.

[Av-Lav]

I'm up for an update whenever you are!