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06-01-2008, 02:07 PM
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My fan fic...:P
Hi! I'm thinking about startinga a fan fic.
I don't usually read fan fics so I don't know really how to write a fan fiction but anyway
It's very boring but I had nothing else to do...
I will never date that guy again! Av thought when she slammed the door behind her.
He wouldn't even open up the door! How rude can you get!?
She went to the bathroom and brushed her teeth and put on her pyjamas.
She sat down on her bed.
Why did she always date rude guys!?
She wanted to find someone who was sweet and nice. She was ready for a serious relationship now.
She burried her face in her pillow and
thought of Deryck...
They had been dating for awhile but Deryck thought that Av was to wild for him so they had broken up...
She almost strated to cry but then someone knocked on the door.
She wonderd who it could be so she got up from the bed and opened the door.
It was Evan. He looked at her with a smile on his face.
Av's face lit as she saw it was Evan. ''Hi'' Evan said.
''Hi!'' Av said. ''How are you?''
''Fine, thanks.'' He said smiling and walked in to her flat. '' How are you? ''
''Not so good...'' ''I've just come home from an horrible date!''
''What happend?''
''The same thing that happens every time... He was a jerk and didn't care about me''
Evan laughed a little bit.
Then Av noticed that Evan had something in his hand.
She smiled and said with excitment in her voice ''You bought 8 miles! Yes!''
8 Miles was one of Av's favourite movies!
She dragged Evan to the sofa and started the movie.
It felt like every worrie just ran of her body when she was with Evan.
She woke up the next day lying on the sofa.
She looked around the flat and rememberd that she and Evan had watched a movie last night
and that they must have fallen asleep.
She heard that someone was in the kitchen so she
dragged herself from the sofa.
It smelt wonderful in the kitchen. She noticed that Evan was looking at her. He was making omelettes for them.
Aww... He's so sweet!
''Good morning'' he said.
''Good morning'' Av said and yawned.
She looked at the clock and noticed it was 10.00 in the morning.
''When did you wake up?'' She asked a little surprised that he was up already making breakfest.
''Around 08.30'' he said.
Av thought that Evan liked to sleep until noone like she does but apparently he doesn't.
They sat down by the table and started eating their breakfest. They discussed the movie they had seen the other night.
After they had eaten they said good bye to each other and Evan left.
It was very empty when Evan left...
She noticed that the clock was about 11.30 so she brushed her theeth and hair and put her ususal black make-up on, got dressed and went to work.
I know it's really short but anyway
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06-01-2008, 02:33 PM
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Yay! An Evril fan fic. 
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06-01-2008, 02:33 PM
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Hehe^^
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06-01-2008, 02:45 PM
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evril! <3 
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06-04-2008, 07:15 PM
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How deep.
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06-07-2008, 06:22 AM
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^´ Ughh a spammer
Please don't tell me its an Evril story  if its not, then I'll read 
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06-07-2008, 06:27 AM
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It's not an EVril story^ But I think this story suck so I'm not gonna keep updating 
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06-07-2008, 06:29 AM
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You just have to get better in sepperating the lines, and make it easy to read, and so on, just minor stuff.. Then you can continue 
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