Seperately: My accoustic song

[Cal]

Well this is...how I sang about 4 months ago. And the mic is crap but it's all good...this is one of my own songs that I have written. Tell me what you think Tyler, seeing as you seem to be a good singer etc...

Listen to "Seperately"

-Cal Guy

To be perfectly honest, I'm actually pretty impressed.

Good chord progression, might want a little more variation, but other then that, it's good.

And all I'm going to say is that when your voice changes, you're going to have to rethink your whole singing strategy. That's all.

[Cal]

Thanks. Ya I know i'm going to have to cut out the female teen pop rock whining and move onto something more...dude-like haha.

[April]

it's downloading hahah i'll reply if i remember when it's done

hey cal_boy.. its awesome!
funny voice... hehe, i sang that high too... 7years ago or so..
but you sing very good.. really!! i gotta say i listened to tylers song too and i think you sing better than him! (sorry tyler...haha)
(and better than me, too..)

bandji

[April]

IT DOESN'T PLAY IN MY JUKEBOX THEMUSIC MATCH

[Cal]

Originally posted by s_bandji
hey cal_boy.. its awesome!
funny voice... hehe, i sang that high too... 7years ago or so..
but you sing very good.. really!! i gotta say i listened to tylers song too and i think you sing better than him! (sorry tyler...haha)
(and better than me, too..)

bandji

Whoa thanks. that's a huge complement seeing as Tyler is fucking awesome..but in the end you can't compare us seeing as we sound nothing alike and sing totally different types of music.

[chris_dude100]

I have to say your great! that was a well done sone! great job!


Can you post the lyrics?

[Cal]

Lyrics:

Seperately we slide
I wish that we'd collide
This endless suicide
My heart I have denied

These feelings I can't take
I think i'm gonna break
This deadly love of mine
The answer's lost in time

(Chorus)
'Cause I
Can't find myself
I'm lost in you
Do you feel it too
This pain
I cannot blame
For I need you
And I miss you
And I want you
In my arms again

In my arms
I wish
I could walk with you
Talk with you
Holding hands
And making plans for the future

You are my future
The greatest fucking future
So come and take my side

(Chorus)
'Cause I
Can't find myself
I'm lost in you
Do you feel it too
This pain
I cannot blame
For I need you
And I miss you
And I want you
In my arms again

In my arms..
Whoa...ya
And I want you
In my arms again
In my arms
Whoa...ya..ya...

(Chorus)
'Cause I
Can't find myself
I'm lost in you
Do you feel it too
This pain
I cannot blame
For I need you
And I miss you
And I want you
In my arms again

In my arms again.

you sound awesome dude! rock on

[chris_dude100]

Awsome post more when u get it online!

woah that was pretty good... i give props 2 you

yea that was pretty good

[Cal]

thank a lot. haha chris like burnt it onto a fuckin cd. I have a fan! woo lol.