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    CHAPTER 19

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    Saffy and I had been discussing the First Time for a while, so when my foster family went away for the weekend, it seemed like a perfect opportunity. And when she invited herself over, it was obvious to the both of us that we weren't going to have a movie night.
    She let herself into my parents bedroom, where we would spend the night. Before I could even say hello, she ran to me and we started an intense tongue fest. I held her close, then picked her up and spun her around and around, before practically throwing her on the bed. For a second there was no sound except our hearts beating.


    "Heroes don't exist, John, and if they did I wouldn't be one of them"

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    If only I could live in one of my stories,that's the only way I would for sure get a happy ending.


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    Omg!!!!!! Awesome story, keep posting, okay?

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    When someone say keep posting usually the next person(me) get frustrated trying to figure out where it might be and then finds out u haven't posted it yet!!!!!!

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    CHAPTER 20

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    I came closer and leaned in to kiss her. Saffy pulled me down, smashed her lips to mine and threw her handsaround my neck. Again, our mouths were as close as you can get, yet I hungered for more. I let my body relax on top of hers, letting my body slide into the space she created for me by spreading her legs. We fit like a jigsaw, tongue in mouth, hand in bra, legs in legs. Slowly, agonizingly, her shirt came off, and she lets me kiss her, all around her boobs. We're both out of breath, moving. Herbreath tickles my scalp. I know she can feel my boner. She pulls me up and kisses my neck, my eyes, my ears, then agonizingly painfully sweetly on the lips. I'm about to undo her bra strap, when I feels her hands on my hips, sliding my pants off.

    Harshly, I am pulled back to reality. What are we doing? She's 16! I'm 19 years old! I'm not going to rob her of her virginity, right here and now!

    I draw away in the middle of a French kiss. She looks startled, then dreamy, as she lets her fingers drift around my body. "Saffy, what the hell are we doing?"
    "We're making out. It's just going a bit further than usual, that's all."
    She was playing gently with the hair on my chest, light blonde, and it was driving me insane.
    "We can't... do it, right here, right now, can we now?"
    "Tell me why not."
    She was going lower. I could smell her perfume, dark, Forbidden Rose. I knew what was forbidden just then, and it was a sort of flower.
    "Because... because..."
    "Because why? You have protection, we have 48 hours... and I have a body... and it's all yourstonight."

    Her boobs weren't even in her bra anymore. I never noticed her cleavage before. What else was there that I could discover tonight?


    "Heroes don't exist, John, and if they did I wouldn't be one of them"

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    CHAPTER 21

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    "Screw it. Let's just go."
    I took off her pants and mine followed soon after.
    "Holy crap, Storm!"
    "Don't be scared."
    "Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh.
    Are you sure about this?"
    "We'll go slow. Come on Saffy, no turning back now. I'm way too turned on."
    "Ohmigosh. Pleasepleaseplease, don't hurt too much."
    "Here we go."
    (Lots of screaming and grunts.)
    "Oh my God, oh my god, go slower, Storm, go sl..."
    (Here were some satisfied groans from both of us, then some whispering)
    "There. That wasn't so bad, was it?"
    In reply I got a kiss, and she pulled me back down. This time it was smoother, with not so much screaming and some giggling as I kissed her tits. I don't think there was an inch of her body I didn't kiss that night. We had crossed the line and there was no turning back.


    "Heroes don't exist, John, and if they did I wouldn't be one of them"

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    Thanks for posting another chapter! NOW POST ANOTHER ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    CHAPTER 22

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    Later that night, after we had gone three times, I was massaging her back, just like she wanted, and trying to go again, when I noticed a red stain on the sheet.
    "Saffy? Are you hurt?"
    "What do you mean?"
    "There's blood on the sheets."
    "Well yeah." She sits up. "That was my first time. You knew that."
    "You never told me there would be blood. Are you sure there's nothing wrong with you? You will live, right?"
    "Storm. I'm fine. There was a little bit of blood, that's all."
    "Why?"
    "Storm, when a girl loses her virginity, something inside her is torn. And when it gets torn, there can be blood. That's why there's blood on the sheets."
    "So... You're ok? And this won't happen every time?"
    "No! Not that I know of."
    "Was it worth it?"

    "Storm, you put me through hell!"
    "I'll take that as a, No you cannot put your dick in me again tonight?"
    "It was... A good sort of hell."
    And with that, I got what I wanted.

    Twice more.

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    WOW !!!! So passionate and clever how it was written . I thought it would be more
    graphic when I read the warning , hahaa . But it was satisfying to read . I read
    yur friends prose and it was good as well .
    This is a procative piece , at least , this chapter was , haha. Thanks.

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    Interesting? 5 times in one night... Must be busy.

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    WOW !!!! So passionate and clever how it was written . I thought it would be more
    graphic when I read the warning , hahaa . But it was satisfying to read . I read
    yur friends prose and it was good as well .
    This is a procative piece , at least , this chapter was , haha. Thanks.
    Thanks! It was kind of hard to write without mentally scarring everyone.

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    You have to write more and faster because once u have the reader in a hook you can't let them go! Hurry up!

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