Good update !! I wonder what he did to her ? New readers too , lots of interest .
Cool!


Good update !! I wonder what he did to her ? New readers too , lots of interest .
Cool!


And a reader from T.O.


Storm
"Don't keep her too long today Storm, she's feeling kind of tired. That baby better come soon because she's not gonna last much longer with it."
"Don't worry, Nurse Klapatiuk, I won't be long, just in to give her these." I look down at the bunch of magnolias I got for her. They were her favourite flower, so perhaps she'll remember that. She's been remembering quite a bit lately.
I walk down the hall to her room. Just as I'm about to walk in, I can hear her talking. I wait at the doorway to hear what she's saying.
"You're the only one in the world who I know I love, Juliet. I mean, I'm sure I DID love Storm, and I TRUST Shyla - with my life! - but I KNOW I love you, and I always, always will.
"There is only a few more weeks until you come, baby girl. I don't know what we're going to do sweetie."
She says a few more things, and then she starts to cry. I know I should have stole away before she saw me but I couldn't resist. As soon as her breathing became even, I went into the room. I stroked her face, I kissed her cheek, I smoothed the hair from her forehead. I put my hand on her belly and I could feel Juliet's little feet kicking at me. What did I do wrong? I could have had all this, without the forgotten love, and like an idiot, I just threw it away.
"I promise, Juliet, I promise, that if your mother remembers me, and if she learns to love me again, that I will never, ever let you go. You... you are the best thing that's ever happened to me. So why didn't I see it before it was too late?"
Saffy stirs in her sleep, and I quickly walk away, without her ever knowing I was there.
"Heroes don't exist, John, and if they did I wouldn't be one of them"


This guy fn' did something ! Good update !


Waht did he do to her?! Did he decided to abandon her and the baby? And what accident caused her the head trauma? So many new questions... I have to say those sex scenes were kind of awkward for me, bur now I'm excited again![]()


Yeah well I'm done with the sex scenessome people asked for them so I put it in. It was kind of fun to write though, but I want to get back to Saffy and Baby Juliet. You guys will have to wait until the end to hear what he did though... mwahahahaha suspense!


I love the suspense. The love scenes too , haha .


its good!!remeber to write!!! on top of everything else!
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Sorry guys I want to post tomorrow but I'm not sure yet. I'm really busy right nowso cross your fingers.
Thanks so much for everything, reading my story and leaving comments, I love to write, I just need people to read my stuff!


No one is interested in my storySilent Song is stealing your attention
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And seasond, for sure, and all the other people leaving comments and supporting you. Don't lose confidence so quickly
And I'm sorry for not thanking your posts, I wasn't thanking anybody in a while since I'm reading from my phone which doesn't show that option
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