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    Ok, this is my first thread so no mean comments please.

    Chapter 1
    Bliss

    Wings. The first thing I remember hearing was the sound of wings, thousands of them. They were all around me. They sounded beautiful, like the voices of a thousand tiny angels whispering in unison. The sounds all blended together into some kind of unearthly melody. The sound became louder, and my surroundings began to sparkle. It was almost as if little diamonds had been set in all the rocks and trees. As my eyes began to adjust to the new found brilliance of my surroundings, a figure started to emerge from the the river beside me. White rose petals began to descend from the sky like snow, covering the ground in a thin satin blanket as he walked toward me. I could could hear my heart beating furiously in my chest, but I didn't know why. I mean, sure he was attractive, but I didn't even know the guy, right? Something about him was familiar. Maybe it was his eyes, so deep and knowing, they"d probably seem familiar to anyone. As he got closer, I could hear his heartbeat too. I could feel my feet starting to slip out from underneath me. He then somehow managed to catch me before I hit the ground. The last thing I remember seeing were his beautiful eyes, then everything went dark.

    When I awoke, I was still surrounded by darkness. Slowly, my eyes began to adjust, the dim light seeping through the cracks in my blinds revealing the vague contours of my bedroom. My heart was still racing. It was just a dream, so why did it seem so real? "No, I cant start questioning the fabric of my existence now! It's only 6:00am! And it's a weekday, I need to get up." I say out loud to myself sounding somewhat ridiculous. I know it was foolish, but a part of me just wanted to let myself fall again to see if the mystery boy would catch me. I had a feeling that if I had stayed asleep, so much more could have happened. But it was only a dream. I checked my clock again, it read 6:15. Time to get up.

    More to come next Friday!
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    Please private message me when u post a new chapter so I no when to paste kk?

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    Wow, better than I expected! Put a link in your signature like I did.


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    Yay! I'm not forever alone! People actually read my story! WOO HOO!!! PARTAY!!!!!
    I'm still just that awesome!

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    It's a nice story . A little red though . How about a little about yu . Where do yu live , age , family etc. Or does that come later?

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    Quote Originally Posted by seasoned To view the link you have to Register
    It's a nice story . A little red though . How about a little about yu . Where do yu live , age , family etc. Or does that come later?
    Although she hasn't told me much but I think she is just righting a story for the hell of it and that she might not include stuff like that.... But I could be wrong

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    I really like it And I can't wait till Friday!
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    Nice! Keep posting! Can't wait till Friday too

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    Sorry I've decided to actually post on both Monday's and Friday's because I finished the chapter early. YAY! You're welcome. Oh, and BTW, at the top of each post just under where it says the number of the chapter, There will be a name , either Bliss or River, they're the main characters. The name that it says is the point of view that the chapter is written from. Just so you know.
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    Sorry I've decided to actually post on both Monday's and Friday's because I finished the chapter early. YAY! You're welcome.
    Haha, works for me, thanks Nice update, I like how those two chapters sound a bit like a fairy tale

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    Quote Originally Posted by Silent Song To view the link you have to Register
    Sorry I've decided to actually post on both Monday's and Friday's because I finished the chapter early. YAY! You're welcome. Oh, and BTW, at the top of each post just under where it says the number of the chapter, There will be a name , either Bliss or River, they're the main characters. The name that it says is the point of view that the chapter is written from. Just so you know.
    Which on is the guy or are they both girls??? I'm confused!!!!

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    Hello Silent Song:

    I've been reading your posts, I found very interesting .. I think no matter if the stories are true or fictitious .. the important thing is that you can develop .. and show every detail of the story .. this that makes it unique!

    I will continue waiting for your posts, you do very well!
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