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    If You Come to Me

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    Chapter One

    “Shit. I am so fucking late,” Riley mutters. She swiftly runs down the sidewalk, her Converse sneakers slapping the pavement. She turns into the alley and bangs open a grey metal door.

    “Riley Thomas…where the hell is that girl?” Big Mike, the boss of Mike’s Grill, is saying.

    “Here! I’m here!” Riley raises her hand. She stabs her nametag through her uniform shirt.

    “Off to work, all of you!” Big Mike commands. As the other employees disperse, he points a chubby finger at Riley. “And you! This is the third time this week you’ve been late! Unacceptable! You’re fired!”

    Riley rolls her eyes. “Playing Donald Trump, are we?”

    Big Mike’s face reddens. “OUT!”

    Riley slams open the metal door she had come through no less than five minutes ago.

    Big Mike follows her halfway. “And have that uniform dry cleaned before you return it!”

    “Fine!” Riley stomps down the sidewalk and sits on a bench. She checks her watch. Mark should appear in three, two, one…

    “Riley!” Mark.

    She smiles.

    “Riley!” Mark sits beside her on the bench. “That has to be like, what, the fourth time Mike has fired you this month?”

    “Fifth. But who’s counting?”

    Mark shakes his head. “Why do you keep doing that? What if he doesn’t hire you back one day?”

    “He will,” Riley says assuredly. “It’s our routine now. Besides, he likes staring at my ass in this.” She fingers the fitted red waitress dress and wiggles her eyebrows suggestively.

    “Dude, did not need to know that.”

    “You used to do the same.”

    Mark gazes at his hands and they’re quiet a few minutes. “What are you gonna do?” he finally asks.

    “Like I always do. Walk around the park, cool off, and beg Mike for my job.”

    Mark claps her shoulder. “See ya in an hour then, Ry.”

    “You too.”

    Riley buys popcorn from a vendor and begins her trek around the park. It’s mid-morning with a light breeze. Little kids are running through the park, dragging toys and mothers behind them. She smiles. I love Los Angeles, she thinks.

    She moved here two years ago after high school to catch her “big break.” Or “your crazy dream,” as her parents so disapprovingly called it. They hadn’t been too happy about the move. Actually, they still weren’t.

    Riley tosses her the empty popcorn container in a trash bin. Two years, she thinks sadly. I thought it would’ve happened by now.

    “It” was becoming a famous rock star. Riley loved music, always had, and knew she wanted to do it for a living, somehow. She started singing at age five, playing guitar at age eight, and writing her own songs by age ten. She competed in all the talent shows and joined bands. But overall, rock superstardom wasn’t a priority in Stillwater, Oklahoma. The bands broke up and everyone moved on—except for Riley.

    “Get your head out of the clouds!” her parents said. “Go to college!”

    That’s not what Riley wanted at all. Much to the dismay of her parents, she packed her things, including her guitar, collected all the cash she had earned throughout her eighteen years, and moved to L.A. where dreams come true.

    She got a job at an arts and crafts store and that was where she met Mark.

    Riley smiles, remembering that day. Mark walked in the store and asked for her help. “I’m going to customize my guitar straps,” he said excitedly. They talked for awhile. He came in a few times every week and they both knew it had nothing to do with guitar straps.

    Mark was shy and quiet, the opposite of outgoing Riley. He asked things like “Can I kiss you?,” he listened when she talked, and he kept lots of things about himself secret while expecting her to reveal everything about herself.

    That was ultimately the downfall of their short romance. By then, they shared an apartment, Mark had gotten Riley a job at Mike’s Grill, and they had developed a close friendship. It only increased when they combined their music efforts.

    It was a stormy day when they discovered this. It was too messy to go anywhere, so they were confined in the small apartment and grating on each other’s nerves. After a shouting match Mark angrily picked up his guitar and began playing. Riley recognized the tune and played the same on her guitar. Soon they were singing, playing other songs, and then writing their own on the spot.

    “We sound fucking awesome together,” Mark said.

    “Yeah,” Riley agreed.

    Their future was sealed. Their band, which they later dubbed the Format, was formed right there. Riley expected it to take awhile before they found a bass player and drummer, but it hadn’t. Mark knew lots of people and introduced her to Dylan and Eric.

    Dylan is very intelligent and worships Bob Dylan, though he swears it has nothing to do with the same name. He wears his bass high and thumps along, off in his own little world. Riley and Dylan don’t talk much, though they both that the other is nice.

    Eric is hyperactive and suave, a total ladies’ man. In fact, the first thing he ever said to Riley was “Hey good-lookin’, what’s cookin’?” He parties hard, but can be serious when it comes down to it. It helps that he’s friendly and a kickass drummer.

    Of course, they didn’t accept her initially. Riley woke up one night and heard the guys talking in the apartment’s cramped living room.

    “Is she good though? I don’t wanna play for some poser or Britney or anything,” Dylan was saying.

    Riley plugged her guitar into the amplifier, cranked the volume up, and raced into a Beatles song and then a Foo Fighters song. Finished, she walked out of her room. “Oh, hey guys, didn’t know anyone was here,” she said, pretending to be surprised.

    “We’re in,” Dylan said.

    “Show-off,” Mark teased when they left.

    “Net worker.” She returned to bed, satisfied.

    Dylan wasted no time, scheduling gigs as often as possible. They built up a local following. They recorded a cheap demo in Dylan’s basement using an old eight-track machine. Now they sold those demos at the regular gig they scored playing at Coffee Zone, a hip hangout for teens.

    Enough reminiscing, Riley decides. Time to beg for my job. She puts on a guilty face and enters Mike’s office.

    “I don’t know why I am this way, Mike,” she wails. “I can’t do anything right! You shouldn’t hire me!” She burst into fake tears. “It’s my hormones. My period is crazy!”

    “There, there.” Big Mike shifts awkwardly on his feet. “You’re just growing up…I’ll hire you back…”

    Riley blows her nose into the tissue he offers her. “Really?”

    “Yeah. But this is the last time. I mean it!”

    She joins Mark at the grill, grabs an ordering pad, and sticks a pen behind her ear.

    “An hour. I’m impressed,” Mark comments.

    “You should be.”


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    Riley hustles through the restaurant, taking order after order. As much as she is fired, she does like working here—the people, the delicious smells, the action. She notices Mark sitting in a booth across from a guy in a suit, deep in conversation. She sidles over to their table.

    “Ry, this is Paul. He’s from a record label,” Mark says, emphasizing the last two words. “Paul, this is Riley, our singer and rhythm guitarist.”

    Riley shakes his hand. “Nice to meet you, Paul.”

    “Work! Quit gabbing, Riley Thomas!” Big Mike hollers from the kitchen.

    “Cheeseburger Deluxe,” Paul says.

    Riley gives him a grateful look.

    “I gave him our demo,” Mark explains. “He’s gonna check us out tonight at our gig.”

    “That’s cool. Um…I hate to rush, but I don’t wanna be fired. Again,” Riley says. “I’ll see you tonight, Paul. It was nice meeting you.”

    Paul nods. “It was a pleasure.”


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    I LOVE THIS!!! I was thinking of Brie Larson's "She Said" video when I originally read this...lol.

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    i love that song!!! i'm gonna look it up on limewire.


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    Limewire?? I own the CD, but I lost it..I should find it.

    Anyways, Nicole, I have to do some stuff and study hadc0re-like for my finals manana. Though, there's an espanol final si si, yehhhhs, but biology and math suck.

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    HA I love this story defininatly one of my faves I love it!

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    yeeey, i REMEMBER this story.

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    Chapter Two

    “Yo.” Eric drapes an arm around Riley’s shoulder. “We got people checking us out tonight?”

    Riley ducks away from his arm. “Indeed we do. They’ll be quite amused by your dialect.”

    “Don’t use words I don’t know.” He taps her with one of his drumsticks.

    “Then I wouldn’t talk at all.”

    Eric grins.

    “Focus, focus,” Mark says. “We have to make this our best show yet. Eric, no stage diving. Riley, don’t hop so much.”

    “Don’t worry, man,” Eric assures him. “Just relax.” He sits at his drum set and twirls his sticks.

    Riley looks down at her ensemble. She had decided to pick out something fun: denim miniskirt, green tank, her black bomber jacket, and Converses. She hopes she looks alright.

    They plug in their instruments and Riley puts on her guitar. She scans the crowd; it’s a good turn-out. She flicks on the microphone. “Hey everyone, we’re the Format. Thanks for coming out tonight.” She glances at Eric. He counts off the beat and they launch into their first song.

    An hour passes by quickly. They go from song to song. Riley loses herself in the music and when their set is over, she wipes her brow. It always seems like we’ve only been up here for a few seconds, she thinks.

    “Thanks!” Riley calls when they’re finished. The crowd claps and whistles for an encore.

    “Leave them wanting more,” Mark advises.

    They gather their equipment and haul it out to Dylan’s van. Paul meets them on one of their back-and-forth journeys and invites them to sit down.

    Paul sips his cappuccino and clears his throat. “The label listened to the demo and they’re interested.”

    “Why? Our demo sucks,” Riley snorts.

    Mark kicks her under the table.

    Paul laughs good-naturedly. “It’s roughly cut, yes, but we sense potential. You guys have an energy onstage. We want you to open up for one of our biggest clients. If the crowd reacts positively, an album will be in the works. Oh, good to see you made it, Evan.”

    Riley turns in the direction Paul is looking. An attractive guy with brown hair is making his way towards their table. He sits next to Paul. “Sorry I’m late. I was at the studio listening to the Format’s demo.”

    “What’d you think?” Dylan asks.

    The guy named Evan laces his fingers together. “The drums are good, but too loud. They overpower everything. You can’t hear the bass at all. The vocals could use some work. They sound…dispassionate.”

    Who does this guy think he is? Riley thinks angrily. “Vocals? I’m vocals! And I’m very passionate, thank you very much!”

    “He’s being constructive--” Dylan begins.

    “So? What does he know anyway? I bet if he had a band we could outsell them any day!”

    Mark kicks her under the table again.

    “Ow! Why do you keep kicking me?”

    Mark covers his head. “Ry, that’s Evan Taubenfeld. He’s one of the biggest names in alternative rock right now. And, oh yeah, his band’s CD has sold seven million copies and counting.”

    “Oh.” She looks at Evan. “Well I’ve never heard of you.”

    “You have his CD!”

    “Oh,” she repeats.

    Evan smirks. “So you’re vocals?”

    “Yes, and rhythm guitar. Problem with that?”

    “No.” Evan eyes her. “I just thought you were a…girlfriend or groupie or something.”

    Paul breaks the tension by discussing touring arrangements with Mark and Dylan, which makes sense, considering they’re the most business-minded.

    “Whoa, wait,” Riley interrupts. “We’re opening for his band?” She points at Evan.

    “The one and only. Problem with that?” Evan mimics her.

    Riley scowls.

    Everyone discusses the tour again except for Riley and Evan. She glares at him and he smirks at her.

    “…And Evan will help observe and improve your sound,” Paul is saying.

    Riley snaps to attention. “Him? Why him?”

    “Because I have a good ear for music,” Evan replies. “I think we’ll start improving with the…vocals.

    She stands. “I’ll be waiting in the van,” she says calmly to Mark. She kicks him in the shins. “Pay back!”

    “Bye now, Riley,” Evan says in disgust.

    Riley storms off to the van. It seems to take forever, but finally the guys emerge from the Coffee Zone.

    “You could’ve been a little nicer,” Mark says to Riley. He unlocks the door to their apartment.

    “I would have! But he doesn’t like me. You can tell!”

    “He doesn’t know you.”

    “That doesn’t stop him from not liking me.”

    “Why aren’t we together anymore?” Mark asks suddenly.

    Riley stares. “Did you have some alcohol?”

    “Maybe a little…”

    “You only ask that when you’ve had alcohol. Go to bed.”

    “Yes ma’am!” Mark salutes and goes to his bedroom.

    Riley goes to hers too and sighs. “Evan Taubenfeld, hah,” she grumbles. “What a joke.”




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