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    you guys are too sweet.

    Chapter Ten
    Riley tosses and turns the whole night, alternating between guilt and anger. Should I go back? No, I won’t. Yes, I will. This continues on and on. She’s surprised when she feels sunlight hit her eyes, not remembering when she fell asleep or for how long.

    She rolls out of bed and walks into the living room. Her eyes widen at the site: her mother, father, and brother are sitting quietly on the couch. Her mother jumps up, as if they were all waiting for her. “Honey, rise and shine!” she says loudly. “Angie was sorry she couldn’t be here!”

    Mr. Thomas hugs Riley and says gruffly, “It’s good to see you again, munchkin.”

    Riley blushes at the pet name; she hasn’t heard it in awhile. “Hey dad.”

    “Hey butthead,” Charlie calls and tosses his baseball cap at her.

    “Right back at you, Charles.”

    “Don’t call me that! It’s Charlie.”

    “Whatever.”

    Mrs. Thomas says, “We took the day off of work today. We thought maybe we could spend some time together. Perhaps a picnic in the park? Or some shopping?”

    “Yeah, that sounds cool,” Riley replies.

    “I’ll make some breakfast!” Mrs. Thomas smiles widely and nearly bounces into the kitchen. Mr. Thomas, already smelling bacon, follows her.

    Riley plops beside Charlie on the couch. “Do mum and dad still sing in the shower?”

    “Hah, no. But they want to buy a turtle.”

    “Why the hell do they want a turtle?”

    “Like I know.” Charlie flicks through the channels and immediately stops. “Holy shit, Riley, look! It’s you!”

    “Huh?” She turns to the television where a deejay is talking.

    “Yeah, this great new band the Format,” the deejay is saying. “And we’ve got their video for their first single, ‘Take It or Leave It.’ It’s awesome, so check it out here, and only here, first!”

    “Mom, Dad, come here!” Charlie shouts. “Riley is on TV!”

    They rush into the room.

    Riley watches in shock. She realizes she’s never seen their video before, much less on television. It’s so surreal, she thinks. I’ve made it. I’ve really made it.

    Her mother squeezes her tightly. “Honey, we’re so proud of you!”

    Riley’s mouth falls open. “You are?” They said it, and not because I encouraged it or begged them to, they are proud of me. They genuinely are!

    “Yes! This is a reason to celebrate! Today, we’ll do whatever you want, anything you choose. What do you want to do today? It’s your choice.”

    Riley stands. “I…” She glances at the television where her music video had just aired. “I know exactly what I want to do. How would you guys like to see me perform tonight in front of ten thousand people?”
    * * * * * *

    Riley walks swiftly through the airport terminal with her parents and brother following her. She keeps checking her watch. “Oh shit, it starts in ten minutes! And we’re not close to the venue! Hurry, let’s go!”

    Mrs. Thomas tries to keep pace. “Well you know honey, you didn’t warn us of this. Getting a plane to Florida at the last minute isn’t the easiest thing in the world!”

    Riley ignores her. “Taxi! Taxi! Fuck, come on!”

    They pile into one and Riley orders the driver to step on it. The cab races through the streets and skids to a halt almost half an hour later in front of the venue.

    “That was cool!” Charlie exclaims.

    “I think I’m going to puke,” Mrs. Thomas says. “I’m glad we don’t have taxis back home!”

    A security guard stops them at the venue’s back entrance. “No admittance,” he growls.

    “I have to be on stage! I’m Riley Thomas!” Riley protests.

    “Like I’m falling for that one! Besides, if you were her, you’d know that the Format canceled the rest of their tour dates.”


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    “They couldn’t have! Look, dude, I’m sorry to have to do this, but…” Riley kicks his knee and the guard yells in pain. She dodges his arm and runs past him. She runs through the hall, peeking in every room along the way. She hears voices in a dressing room at the end of the hall.

    “Why would she do that to us?” Eric.

    “She had her reasons…” Dylan.

    “But now it’s for nothing! We can’t play the show!” Mark.

    “Guys, quit with this pity party,” Riley says. She bangs open the door. “Can we just rock now?”

    Mark leaps up from the couch. “What are you doing here?” he asks angrily.

    “We don’t have time for that, let’s go! You can be mad at me later. Oh yeah, these are my parents.” Riley steps aside, introducing them.

    Dylan grins at her. “I knew we could count on you.”

    Riley rolls her eyes but also grins. “Let’s just fucking rock out.”

    Mrs. Thomas raises her eyebrows. “Honey, that language!”

    The guys crack up and tease her as they hurry down the hallway towards the stage. Dave looks shocked to see them. “We already told the audience you wouldn’t be here, so how…never mind, no explanations! Just use whatever instruments you find!”

    Riley strides on stage confidently, slinging her guitar around her neck. “Sorry for the confusion!” she shouts into the microphone. “How the hell is everybody doing?”

    “Oh honey, that language,” Mark jokes into his microphone.

    The crowd laughs and cheers.

    The Format waste no time and plunge right into their set. Riley glances to the side of the stage and sees her parents and brother waving and dancing and overall having a good time. She smiles. She surveys the crowd and almost feels tears in her eyes. This is what I’ve always wanted, she thinks. I’m a famous rock star, I’m playing to tons of people in my band, my parents are supportive of me. It’s perfect…almost.

    Close to finishing their set, Mark motions to her. “Me and the guys heard the song you wrote with Evan. We kind of wrote some music to go with it. Do you remember the words?”

    Riley concentrates on her feet. “Yeah…”

    “Let’s do it.”

    “Okay.” She walks nervously to the microphone. “Hey everybody, this is a new song. It’s called ‘Before You.’”

    The crowd cheers loudly.

    “And I hope I don’t mess up because I don’t remember it all that well…”

    The crowd suddenly becomes a deafening roar.

    Wow, Riley thinks. They must want some new material.

    “Do you mind if I join you on this song?”

    “What?” Riley turns and blinks. Standing where Mark usually is…is Evan. He slips his guitar on and adjusts the microphone to his height. She gapes at him.

    “I said, do you mind if I join you on this song?” Evan repeats.

    “Um, erm…sure.” She faces the crowd and strums her guitar, singing nervously. “I lied and I screamed, said things that I didn’t mean. I watched them all walk out the door…”

    The rest of the song passes quickly. Riley sings with as much as passion as she can and the song sounds awesome, especially when Evan joins her on the vocals.

    “And I don’t wanna think about me before you…” she finishes. She turns to Evan and he’s staring at her. “Thanks everyone, have a great night!”

    She hands her guitar to the guitar technician. Suddenly Evan is striding over to her. What’s he—he kisses her full on the mouth in front of everyone.

    “I went crazy when I found out you had left,” he whispers.

    “Yeah,” Riley says, not knowing what else to say. “Aren’t afraid of the damage control you’ll have to do after this?”

    “Hah, not worried at all. Listen, Riley. I treated you like shit. You had every right to hate me. Why did you come back?”

    Riley looks into his eyes. “I think you know why.”

    Evan thinks a second and grins and they kiss again. “’Cause you know if you come to me, I make things right.”

    THE END

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    BACON! EL TOCINO!yayyy!

    You have a copyright?? Ooooohhhhh

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    since when was it copyrighted?
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    awesome awesome awesome

    ive confused myself on the order of the evan/riley stories now though eh, ill figure it out

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    Quote Originally Posted by ktg205
    awesome awesome awesome

    ive confused myself on the order of the evan/riley stories now though eh, ill figure it out
    that's my fault, hehe...it goes like this:

    1.) if you come to me

    2.) you are

    3.) fall to pieces


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    I love all of them but you are is most definatly the best one there is:

    'no i don't eat apples with cheese. Who does that?'Riley mumbles and topples off the bed and jolts awake. She rubs her head. Definatly not eating japanese food before bed anymore. What a crazy dream she thinks.'

    that is the best line in any story ever written I love that line.
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    hahaha...

    I personally believe that the best lines can from the sasha story... LMAO the squirell... "those beadly lil eyes" LMAO... wow...
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    thanks for the order nicole

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    ahh, I should do my update on sasha. I've been too lazy, esh. NICOLE, I randomly IMed this dude and he added me on myspace and then deleted me and then, I believe, blocked me. WHAT THE FUCK?!?!

    I'm so effen bored right now and nobody wants to talk to me!!

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    well every time i try to talk to you on msn or AIm you ignore me and/or never message me anyway, so you tell me.


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