the surprise?!

[Seyary_Minamoto]

He's gonna suicide.I know it, its so obvious

[Vampire Welfare Queen]

Yeah, I can feel a suicide coming on.

Or an attempted suicide.

Oooh ooh! And then Steve and Cone will find him. Am I right, am I right?

[Alwayswritelynn]

OMG! NO! DONT HIM SUICIDAL! THATS CRAZY!

[In The Rhymes]

Suicide isn't crazy, but it'd be damn sad to see Deryck do it in this story.
However, if it was written in here it wouldn't surprise me. It fits perfectly, actually.
But i do not know how the next update will be.

[bunny]

I walked to the place where I saw Avril’s medicines. I looked at them, and put the liquid medicines in a glass. I put all the pills in my hand. And looked around me, it wasn’t enough. I spotted sleeping pills. I put a lot of them together with the pills from Avril. With the glass in my hand and the pills in the other I walked to the bed. I looked at the pills as I sat down the bed, I felt so scared, I never been so scared my life. I felt empty and tired of all the things that were going through my head. I felt the same scared as I felt the night Avril passed away. I still can feel her heart on my chest as that night. I still feel her cold body in my arms. I still feel the pain in my heart since she is gone. I needed to be free of this treble live. I didn’t want to live and I didn’t care about what people would say about me that I left my friends and my mother alone. It was my life and I wanted to end if, if I was ready for it. But was I ready to die? I looked at the pills and knew that I had never been good in swallowing pills. The liquid was something else. It should be easy to drink it. I saw Avril drinking it many times, not that much I had in my glass, but I thought it wouldn’t be the hardest thing to do. Maybe I needed help to get through this time. Maybe I would feel better in a few months. But did I want help? Did I want to talk about my problems with someone I don’t know? Talking wasn’t something I was good at. And specially when it goes about Avril. I put the glass on the night stand and looked at the pills, what in the world was I doing? Shall I do it, or just but them back and ask someone to help me?

[In The Rhymes]

Aww, I was hopin Id find out if he would do it or not
That's so sad!

Lol, Im sorry I find the part where it says he always had a problem swallowin pills, bc my parents thinks everyone can do it, I cant either. I have to cut them up or dissolve them into water...yuck.

Thanx for updating today

[Nimbus Pixie]

ASK SOMEONE TO HELP YOU; DERYCK!!!!!!!! DON'T DO IT!!!!

[Vampire Welfare Queen]

GET HELP, DERYCK!

GET HELP!

[bunny]

I have been really bad with not updating the last part of the story
I will miss the story a lot and I hope the next one will be better

I was in the car going to Deryck’s place. Cone and I wanted to surprise him. By telling him we won an award for best new single. We were so happy about it but Deryck didn’t knew it yet. We turned left and after tree houses we parked the car in front Deryck’s place. It was a huge house with a lot of flowers in the garden. Avril loved roses so there where all kind of roses. Pink, red and white ones. We walked to the door and knocked on it. After five minutes he still didn’t open. It was still morning, so he could be still in bed.
‘’Let’s check the back door.’’
We walked around the house and tried to open it. Deryck must have forgot to lock it because it was still open.
‘’Hey Deryck, we have great news.’’
I yelled through the house. I looked at Cone, who walked to the kitchen and got some food to eat. After a while Deryck still didn’t show up.
‘’Let’s walk to the bedroom to wake him.’’
WE walked to the bedroom and stopped in front of the door.
‘’What if he is chancing his clothes?’’
Cone asked.
‘’So what? He need to wake up now.’’
I pushed the door open and walked in. Like I thought Deryck was still in bed. We walked to the bed and started to push him a little. He was laying very still in bed. I put the blanket of him and saw he had a photo’s of Avril in his hand.
‘’Look!!’’
Cone yelled at me.
‘’That glass. What is in it?’’
The glass was almost empty and there was a weird kind of liquid in it which didn’t look like water. Cone and I looked at each other. And then I spotted something.
‘’Cone?’’
I said with a soft scared voice.
‘’Yes?’’
I swallowed and pointed at some pills in Derycks hand. Cone ran to Deryck and started to push him around.
‘’Deryck, wake up, DERYCK!!!’’
Cone felt his wrist, and looked at me with a white face.
‘’Call his mother. He is dead.’’

I young woman, broth me from hell to heaven. She showed me that the world is a pretty place where we can live in peace and love. She told me about her dream to be free from her soul and to be in her real heaven. And live there without her pain and fear. I always believed I was in heaven already. That I was in a place where know body could hurt me. But now that the angel I know, is in her real heaven I feel like I am in hell. I have had never felt so many pain. My heart is still full with the love she gave me. But it is broken and I can’t find the peaces together. Please let me find my angel, so I can live together with her in her heaven.

The end

[pigster]

OMG!!! You did kill him off!!! cant they try to revive him???!!!! Was this the last update?

[Nimbus Pixie]

OMG!! You DID it?!?!?! I can't believe it...

[bunny]

OMG!!! You did kill him off!!! cant they try to revive him???!!!! Was this the last update?

yep last update, and no he wouldn't come back to live