A long way to go [part 2]

[bunny]

Some of you may have been reading my story ''a long way to go'' there will come a part 2 (yay) but first I need to know if there are any people in for it? Like if they will read it or not.

And for the people that didn't read ''A long way to go'' this ''part'' will be very easy to read even if you didn't read the first part. It's not that you have to read it to understand this part. But for you I will write down in just a few lines where it goes about.

[Morenor]

but first I need to know if there are any people in for it?

Me !!!!!!!!

[Nimbus Pixie]

I'm ABSOLUTELY going to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[White Night Fantasy]

me!!!

[bunny]

this is in a few lines where ''a long way to go'' went about

-Avril is/was cutting herself
-Deryck loved alcohol and drugs a little to much
-found eachother
-moved to LA to start a new life
-Loved each other got engaged
-Avril got pregnant
-She cut herself in the belly, baby died
-She stopped talking, eating, she just didn't react at anything
-She got in a pshyco hospital
-A man kept coming in her room, he loved her but she couldn't talk or react on him
-Man kidnept her
-Deryck gets hopeless. After awhile falls in love with a police woman
-When they get married Avril walks in (right before Deryck can say ''I do'')
-They come back together
-Deryck ask Avril to marry, but she says no
-Avril leaves because she wants to get her life back to normal and thinks she has to do that on her own.

That's about it. As you can see I love 3 things
1. Love
2. Drama
3. Bad endings

So your warrned. One more thing I live in Holland, have dyslexia so my English is far from perfect. If I keep making the same mistakes, please tell me, I love to learn

[Seyary_Minamoto]

I'll be sure to say this time, I guess I passed by a lot of your mistakes in the other stories. Now start the typing and post the so long waited new update!XDXDXD YAY!!! I knew this had to come!

[bunny]

An other day, an other long never ending day. My brains died 6 months ago. But my body was still moving on. Or at least what was left of it. Drugs alcohol and parties ruined everything that was left of it. There was nothing left over from the guy I used to be. My soul was empty and my heart was broken. My friends had turned there back at me. Only my closed friends Cone and Steve where still seeing me. But I knew they didn’t understood me. Maybe if I would have tried more, that they would stay with me. But it didn’t care anymore. A few years ago I would call myself crazy think like this. But since Avril left me I didn’t care about anything. I had been trying to chance myself. But after just one week I had noticed that nothing in my body wanted or had the power to chance. I simply gave up. I used to see light in live but now I only saw a big dark hole. And there was nothing that only looked as light in it. I took a deep breath and looked at my messed up face in the mirror. This is how my life would look like. With a beaten face, using drugs and being alone. Alone with a memoir of a girl who left me with a broken heart. A tear run down my face. This was the first one. The first tear in 6 months. A tear of anger at tear of fair. But most of all a tear of love.

[Nimbus Pixie]

YAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's back!!!!!!!!

[Morenor]

NOOO!!! You can't let Deryck get back on that shit lifestyle he once had, I don't know why but always I feel bad seeing fictional Deryck mess up his life, maybe its because I love real Deryck

[pigster]

awwwwww!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!

[lininhaav41]

yeahhhh
i love this storie
glad you are making a sencond part of it

[bunny]

With my cold red hands I took the cocaine and used it. When I was younger it would give me a kick right away. But after using it so much for so long it took me longer and more to get a feeling that it worked for me. I felt my eyes closing. There was nothing in the house to eat for me. I had to go to town to buy food. My head was spinning around. The vodka that was left over from last night was on the table. With some trouble I got to the table and opened the bottle. Cold vodka was going through my body. But it didn’t feel right. It felt like something in my head popped out. I was trying to focuses at one point in the room. But everything around me started to move. Walls where going up and down. Paintings on the walls started to laugh at me. My legs broke down. A feeling a scarred came in me. Nothing in the room seemed to be nice at me. The plants where starting to punch me. My hand was looking for the phone, while my legs couldn’t move at all. How much I tried to find the phone. I couldn’t find it. ‘’HELP!!!!’’ Without think I screamed for help. Nobody was around me, or knew that I was at home. Then I saw the phone on the floor. Slowly I tried to crawl to it. Just before I could take the phone it became all black in front of my eyes. My head rested on the floor. While something in side me told me to get the phone. But I couldn’t. Nothing in my body moved. I felt down, down in a big black hole.